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| "As I Lay Dying" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 13:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hn. it was good. i would suggest, if ever you do any more of these one-shots, if you go into detail about certain events that happened, but they didn't really in the move, people will get seriously confused. there are people who will think those events happened in a book that doesn't exsist, or in another movie, an will search all hell for it. So you can do one of two things. State that all the evnts are made up by you, or create short stories with these events. uP to you. Thank you for writing. ~Sistine~
| Title: OMG! q.q
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad! I love the Appleseed movie and this is so fitting! You nailed it! Poor Briareos. You did a great job of catching what must have been his last thoughts on that battlefield, his last thoughts of her. So sweet, so sad, so wonderfully emotional. Kudos.
| Reviewed By: Una_Dougal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy cats! This is awesome. I have not seen the movie yet, but used to read the manga. Nicely done,
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