| "Love Hurts" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 07:23 CDT
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sorry about your lung i hope you feel better youd think that after that your parents would go easy on you but i guess not any ways up date really soon anf for the long wait you owe us a verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry loooooooong chapter please up date soon oh and can you post this on fanfiction.net It will get you alot of reviews and a lot of people never mind think about fanfiction.net please up date soon Bye bye
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Title: Spiked
Reviewed By: MidnightTimberWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story sounds cool... Though you should separate the speach lines so it doesn't get confusing adding a bit more to the page as well. I don't mean to sound evil but clarity works and I do like the story so update soon...
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really liked your first chapter! ^.^ good plot but kinda short. oh and get better, the lung collapsing thing doesn't sound to good. update soon!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Charlene On: September 07, 2006 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!! I'M BEGGING UUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;.;
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Reviewed By: kagsinred~not login~ On: June 19, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
too short... must make it longer... but its good that is great you need to update soon please you have a great talent at fan-fiction you should hury up and write the nexted chapter because you are wonderful at this please update soon
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Title: coooooooolll
Reviewed By: Devil's Angel 111254 On: April 04, 2006 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is great you need to update soon please you have a great talent at fan-fiction you should hury up and write the nexted chapter because you are wonderful at this please update soon.
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