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| "Neko's Healing" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Title: Edit
Reviewed By: silly angel faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...-_- I originally put your style and spelling at 10 each, but my stupid computer was like, NARF! And so I'm correcting it. Still love you. Still hate my computer's ever-sadistic black guts.
| Title: Holy FREAKING Crap...
Reviewed By: silly angel faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style is impeccable, your grammar unimpeachable, your ORIGINALITY AND CREATIVY OFF THE DAMN SCALE, but 10 is the highest they'd allow me to go, the enjoyment was basically THE BEST KYOU FIC I'VE EVER READ, and OMG I want to have your babies. ^^ This was an awesome story. I'd NEVER have put Shampoo and Kyo together in my wildest dreams. And here, I've gotten so many good fic ideas for them. *_* Mmmm, kitty love... LOL Your Ranma was so great, too. I stopped reading Ranma at book 12 or 13, so I really didn't know what was going on in the Ranmaverse. I actually stopped reading for like ten minutes and looked up Ranma info to understand your story better. I usually NEVER make that effort in a story. If I don't know what happens in the anime/manga, I quit. Don't wanna bother. But wow, you have really rocked my world with this one. I laughed so hard at the Nabiki-Ryoga thing. You never said what happened with them! I was like, OMGWTFP-chan! XD Really and truly, I have been a fan of yours since Revelations. To be really, really honest...*blushes* I printed out the entire story. Revelations, I mean. My best friend is a rabid Kyou fan, and for her birthday, I bought this nice binder, printed out the entire Revelations story, made a lovely little cover page with the title and your name, and gave it to her. She was insensate for, like, thirty minutes. She loves you. She wants to marry you. But I get to have your babies. XD So when I heard you'd written another one, I was like, Holy crap, I've gotta read it. And I spent the next five hours on my computer. *nodnod* And then I went and read Unworthy. You seriously need to get more Ranma/Furuba out there on the web. I'm a diehard CrazyDragon fan. Mwah.
| Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: May 24, 2006 20:15 CDT
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This story - this story is AMAZING. i'm bowled over. You need to update, SOON. I read it all in one night, please oh please,update soon...!
| Reviewed By: insanechildfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 23:06 CST
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this is great. I love Kyo! This is great how you helped ease Yuki's and Kyo's rivalary.
| Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Rini Snape On: February 24, 2006 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All i can say is wow! Your story was awsome!! Your right about the name of the attacks, I have no friggin' clue what the name of there attacks are I would have been totally lost. Well please up date soon I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. You also captured everyones charcter so perfectly. I'm way impressed!
| Title: FFRG Review Chapter One
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 20:10 CST
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Thanks for submitting to FFRG. I have seen your story on the site, just haven't taken the time to read it yet since I happen to be an avid Kyou/Tohru shipper and when I read Furuba...that's what I am usually looking for. I was was very impressed with your characterization in this first chapter. I am a huge stickler for characterization and keeping them true to their manga/anime personalities. You did an excellent job with Kyou, who is also my favorite character--including his weekness for the onigiri. I do believe that he would help Yuki, especially if Tohru was worried...but mostly because he does care (even just a little) about his family. Grammar was wonderful, nothing stuck out as 'odd' or 'wrong' to me on first read through. The only thing that really did make it difficult to read, was the fact that you did a lot of telling and not showing. It's hard when you are going in someone's POV where they aren't speaking to anyone else very much to make things run fluidly. The beginning with Tohru was a spot where I really felt you could have improved on that. Other then that, an enjoyable read. I will come back to it when I have freetime, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for submitting!
| Reviewed By: TickingandTockingToday On: January 26, 2006 16:07 CST
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I love you. And Kyo. And pancakes. And stories that are updated and/or finished. If you get my drift.
| Reviewed By: theblazingsky On: January 22, 2006 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good story so far, good job of building suspence, and creating the atmosphere of the enviroment. Many fic writers overlook that detail somtimes and are to eager to go in and finish the story.
| Title: Still good.
Reviewed By: racaro_the_lost_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's still good. Shigure's P.O.V. actually made it seem compleat. Next Chapter... PLEASE!
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: racaro_the_lost_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... this is just... uber, thats the only word I have for it, uber. But I hate you and your cliffhangars. POST THE NEXT CHAPTER YOU KUSO ATAMA! o.o, sorry about that. Deffinetly on my favorites list. Can't wait for the next chapter. Man this is just uber.
| Title: This is a test...
Reviewed By: CrazyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 20:23 CST
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::Grrrrrr...!:: Two stories with no reviews on MediaMiner, but oodles of 'em on ff.net...? Methinks I smell a bug or two! ::stalks off looking for a phone to call Skuld to come exterminate the little beggar::
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