| "Learning Life the Hard Way" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: *pondering*
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 18:53 CDT
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How long will it be before you are able to post another chapter? please say that it is soon!!!!!!
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Title: Update please
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 17:45 CDT
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Please update soon so I can find out what happens next k?
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Title: Absolutely Loved
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I absolutely love the fanfic you are working on as well as the sayings and comments you have for the characters to make it interetaining. It is very good and I hope that you will continue to write more of it ^ ^
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the story and I can't wait for the next chapter. It's such a good series.
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this story quite a bit actually. You've got VERY good characterization and the humour bits are totally in character as well as damn funny. The only thing you may want to do is check your spelling and wording to make sure it's following proper structure and meaning. If no one's beta-ing this, you're doing a lot better job than some on here. It's really nice to see you update it, it's been on hold for a while and I thought you'd dropped it (like so many other stories have been), so didn't comment when I found it a couple months ago. I think one of the biggest reasons even (can I say this?) "crap" stories get reviews is that the author updates on a fairly regular basis. I HOPE you continue this not because of reviews, but because it's a damn fine read. Thank you for it and I plead with you to continue it and not leave it laying in the dust along with all the carcasses of good stories that were never finished.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad your updated this chapter was really good keep up the great work. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: April 30, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For your 1st fic. this is pretty good ...Please update a.s.a.p:)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Im no writer, but I think this is really good. You have a really good style, and love what you have thus far. Update when you can.
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Title: Okay, I'll take a crack at it...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 07:55 CST
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Is Shippo's wife Shiori? I like the story thus far and wow...Shippo got laid O.O being kags' teacher reminds me a bit of Purity. Nice touch. Definitely ready for the next chap & I love how Sess can make Shippo revert. Tee hee
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Title: First Night= Hilarious
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 20:04 CST
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"Like a filthy, rancid, rank, reeking, stinking human." Oh, I laughed my ASS off. Very funny. I like where you're going with this. "Humph if fifty years have passed and you look that old Kikyo must have one foot in the grave." freaking classic. I love how you taking stuff straight from the manga & anime. This fic is going to ve VERY fun. Update soon!
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Title: Lemon= Salivate!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 19:48 CST
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I haven't been getting notifications *grumbles* I got one fo the last chap but not this one. I think MM deliberately wanted to keep me from a hawt lemon *pouts* Nice chap, and i really like the youkai housing idea. It makes for lots of great characters. Good job! I'll be back to review again when i read the next chappie!
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: TheBloodSins17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww i love it so far...But you gotta update soon:) you keep updating and ill keep reviewing lol. Any way nice job on it!
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Title: Awesome! I love it already!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 02:31 CST
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First of all, thank you so much! I'm truly honored that you thought of me at all, much less gave me a dedication. The story is awesome! I love the way it's written, especially the second chap. Like Luc said, the part where mama sees Sess for a few seconds in his true form was great. I missed A LOT of ear tweek, but i'm okay with spoilers. I saw eps 1-127 & all four movies, so i'm prepared. To me, taking from the anime & manga makes it that much more fun. I've added this one to my faves & look forward to the next chapter! P.S. Dayuuuuum Sess got a bad ass car! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 13:41 CST
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I've never seen the story written from this point of view before. Your spacing has become a little better, but if you space between every conversation twice, and between every paragraph twice, it will be easier to read. I figured in the first chapter who is wife might be, and I hoped that's who she was. ((When you described the picture of his family on his desk)), so thanks for letting me know before anyone else. muhahahaa! Another tip for your story is, it seems to move a littl fast. Like When Sesshomaru just appeared to explain everything. I love how Mrs.Higurashi saw him in his natural form for a split second. But I do think the atmosphere and his entrance, and their talk could have been elaborated upon some more. The idea of this story is incredible, and I've never read anything like it. It's very good work, and I can't wait to see more. Don't be discouraged by any suggestions I make, because you're still a new writer, and you're developing. I mean, sheesh, read the first chapter of The Divine Prison, and you'll see I totally have room to talk. My writing was awful then, and didn't compare to yours at all, lol. So keep writing, good luck, and in my next AN I'll see if I can swing some readers your way. ;)
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 20:27 CST
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This is brilliantly written! However, you may want to put a *spoiler* disclaimer on it. Alot of that stuff hasn't happened in america yet. :D I watched the movie in Japanese too. I love subtitles. :D Your descriptions are really nice. I love the background information you're giving. I hope more people come to read. :D
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