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Title: Love it as always
Reviewed By: kashu-kinshou On: March 10, 2008 17:08 CDT
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You did a great job on the latest chapter ^ ^ Man it had been so long since I've been able to get on mediaminer. I've been busy at Job Corps here, trying to get my drivers licence, high school deploma, and trade deploma stuff >< busy, busy, busy! But man is it great to havea bit of time to read ^ ^ (BTW It's me kashumaru, was a bit lazy on loggin' in LOL)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I hope you get the urge to write soon. This is the start of a great story. I can't wait to see how Miroku handles meeting Sango again. Does she remember him or not? Does he become the same hentai that he is in the past? Does he ask her the famous "will you bear my child?" question? From what you have written I assume that Inuyasha stays with Kagome in the future and they don't live the 500 years to get there. I can't wait to see how that comes about and their first meeting with the modern Sesshomaru. It looks like this is going to be one of the longer fics and I am looking forward to seeing it as long as you maintain the quality that you have been showing here.
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Title: *pondering*
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 18:53 CDT
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How long will it be before you are able to post another chapter? please say that it is soon!!!!!!
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Title: Update please
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 17:45 CDT
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Please update soon so I can find out what happens next k?
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Title: Absolutely Loved
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I absolutely love the fanfic you are working on as well as the sayings and comments you have for the characters to make it interetaining. It is very good and I hope that you will continue to write more of it ^ ^
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the story and I can't wait for the next chapter. It's such a good series.
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this story quite a bit actually. You've got VERY good characterization and the humour bits are totally in character as well as damn funny. The only thing you may want to do is check your spelling and wording to make sure it's following proper structure and meaning. If no one's beta-ing this, you're doing a lot better job than some on here. It's really nice to see you update it, it's been on hold for a while and I thought you'd dropped it (like so many other stories have been), so didn't comment when I found it a couple months ago. I think one of the biggest reasons even (can I say this?) "crap" stories get reviews is that the author updates on a fairly regular basis. I HOPE you continue this not because of reviews, but because it's a damn fine read. Thank you for it and I plead with you to continue it and not leave it laying in the dust along with all the carcasses of good stories that were never finished.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad your updated this chapter was really good keep up the great work. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: April 30, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For your 1st fic. this is pretty good ...Please update a.s.a.p:)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Im no writer, but I think this is really good. You have a really good style, and love what you have thus far. Update when you can.
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Title: Okay, I'll take a crack at it...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 07:55 CST
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Is Shippo's wife Shiori? I like the story thus far and wow...Shippo got laid O.O being kags' teacher reminds me a bit of Purity. Nice touch. Definitely ready for the next chap & I love how Sess can make Shippo revert. Tee hee
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Title: First Night= Hilarious
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 20:04 CST
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"Like a filthy, rancid, rank, reeking, stinking human." Oh, I laughed my ASS off. Very funny. I like where you're going with this. "Humph if fifty years have passed and you look that old Kikyo must have one foot in the grave." freaking classic. I love how you taking stuff straight from the manga & anime. This fic is going to ve VERY fun. Update soon!
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Title: Lemon= Salivate!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 19:48 CST
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I haven't been getting notifications *grumbles* I got one fo the last chap but not this one. I think MM deliberately wanted to keep me from a hawt lemon *pouts* Nice chap, and i really like the youkai housing idea. It makes for lots of great characters. Good job! I'll be back to review again when i read the next chappie!
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: TheBloodSins17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww i love it so far...But you gotta update soon:) you keep updating and ill keep reviewing lol. Any way nice job on it!
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Title: Awesome! I love it already!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 02:31 CST
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First of all, thank you so much! I'm truly honored that you thought of me at all, much less gave me a dedication. The story is awesome! I love the way it's written, especially the second chap. Like Luc said, the part where mama sees Sess for a few seconds in his true form was great. I missed A LOT of ear tweek, but i'm okay with spoilers. I saw eps 1-127 & all four movies, so i'm prepared. To me, taking from the anime & manga makes it that much more fun. I've added this one to my faves & look forward to the next chapter! P.S. Dayuuuuum Sess got a bad ass car! ^_^
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