Reviewed By:LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 16:46 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I have to agree with KawaiiTenshi on this one. This story is as good as the last one. With the stuff about the eating dissorders and the thoughts of suicide made the story the way I like them, a little happeness and a little angst. If you have a little angst in your stories it rounds out the happeness and makes a better story overall.
Reviewed By:KawaiiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 18:06 CDT Comment/Review: you said this wasnt as good as your other stor but i LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!
