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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 22:11 CDT
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Just like the others I've read this story is very good. You are so creative; I love the imagery. I sure hope that you update this soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 13:38 CST
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OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH! I like it! I love it! I can't wait to see how Sam handles Freya and when Gray comes back into the picture. Can't wait. Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 13:30 CST
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I am patiently waiting for the next chapter. I'm sure you're busy with all the stories you have going on. Can't wait for the next chapter. Grin. I wanna know what happens! Jessica
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 11:33 CST
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You are good at leaving a girl hanging. I can't wait to see what happens. How long have you been working on the idea for this story? It seems to me that you know a lot of background on the world in which it is set. I have been working on my story for six years, and the idea for the story for eleven. And I'm only 21. It's nuts I know. But the characters are very near and dear to me. I'm sure you can understand when it comes to your story. Can't wait for Gray to pop back up. I think he's my favorite right now. Grin. Can't wait. Update as soon as you can. Oh, and ps, how does Ed react to a baby on the way? Grin. Jessica
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 11:26 CST
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I totally love how the story changes point of view! And I love the name Gray. That's my son's middle name. Harper Gray Russell. He's five months old and the biggest reason I haven't had time to work on my story too much. But I've nearly gotten the first chapter revised. I realized the story needed more background info and a little fleshing out. I can't wait to see what happens next in your story!
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 11:15 CST
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Oh Oh Oh! I'm going to try and guess what happens! Medea isn't dead but they said that as part of the thing to break her down, right? And then she finds out that Medea isn't dead and she escapes and we all live happily ever after! Well, with a lot more action in between of course. I guess I'll have to wait and see!
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 11:09 CST
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Oh wow. I like it. Can I make a few suggestions? When I was a senior in High School, my creative writing teacher set us an assignment to write a short story completely in present tense. It helped me to realize how I would slip between present and past in some of my other stories. It might be a great exercise to fine tune your skills and help with revisions. Just an idea. And I found it fun. Great job though. I love your story. Now, on to the next chapter.....
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 11:02 CST
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Wow! I really like it so far. I love the last sentence. That's my favorite. I'm glad that you write original works too. I can't wait to read some more. Just thought I'd review before I went on.
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