| "Ignored, Abandoned, and Forsaken" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Mr.Foo On: September 02, 2003 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
S/A WOO-HOO XD
(not very original, but I DONT CARE, ITS AN S/A FAN FIC) |
Reviewed By: Anskiere On: December 24, 2002 08:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I read the fic 'Wake' and indeed there are many similarities, but for one thing you were original in the fact that asuka has wounds from all 9 lances, it's the first time that ive seen it. Usually they just keep the damaged arm and eye and ignore other wounds. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
PS:I agree with the shinji and rei are brother and sister thing and if not that then at least family. |
Reviewed By: bad2dxtreme On: July 29, 2002 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
although i'm a big fan of S/A fics, im not that biased. but i have to say the style of writing and originality of this fic is worth the read. the characters arent that OOC at all. recommend reading material |
Reviewed By: Wanderer On: April 17, 2002 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, well-balanced fic. I like it it. The characters aren't really OOC, there are little, if none, spelling and grammar mistakes. (However, I take German in school, and just to notify you, it is spelled "dummkopf") I hope to see this continued soon. |
Reviewed By: NeoZeratul On: March 22, 2002 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! Finally a second chapter! This is getting good! I like the multiple perspectives style, seeing the same scene though the eyes of both parties, its very cool! ^_^ look forward to chapter 3 (soon I hope)! |
