Reviewed By: TearsOfTwilight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I really do adore this fic. Not only does in concern some of my favorite pairings, but the way you use moderately short yet powerful sentences is uniquely moving. I can't help but wonder if Marik's character will become more complex or remain fully evil. Either way it will be a pleasure to read. One thing that might help is separating your writing into more distinct paragraphs. The dialogue got hard to follow sometimes. Anyway, I'm really excited about this story and can't wait to see what happens. TOT
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