| "the meeting" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: harhar On: October 27, 2008 05:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
god this story fuckin cracked me up!!! first chapter was like two lines..and thats all u have! ahahahahah oh how i laughed. please keep writing its sooo fuckin funny!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 01:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
???????????? Whats going on in this story I have know Idea....ya.....hmmmmmmmmmm not much to say but i read it realy fast
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 21:41 CST
Comment/Review:
so k.... jus make it longer next time....
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make Kag Fageeta's long lost daughter! Make her the most powerfull one there.... and make her fall in LOVE with trunk's..... MOST importantly.... LONGER CHAPPY'S PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animefreak420 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 20:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Well to say the least it was short. I don't mean to be rude but you really need to explain use more then just diologe. I mean come on people are not going to know what is happening without a little detail.
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