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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 20:04 CDT
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please update!I really like your story, and I need to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: puertorrican-babe On: May 05, 2007 20:03 CDT
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yeah!! you updated! It's kind of been a while but I'm glad you got the time to continue this fic. Write us soon!!!
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Reviewed By: puertorrican-babe On: April 25, 2007 06:31 CDT
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I have to tell you gaetagirl that THIS fanfic is in top of my top 10 list. I hope ypu continue it soon!! I first read it at the fanfiction.net site but I couldn't review there because I don't have an account but let me tell you this, you better not discontinue this fic like some writers do cause it is simply to good to go to waste. Post soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Penitent
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Blonde On: February 28, 2006 20:10 CST
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What a waste that the same person reviewed 6 times saying the same damn thing over and over.
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Title: Penitent
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: dimelessjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please hurry up and finish it I can't wait 'til the next chapter.
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Title: Penitent
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Penitent
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: BizarroGirl On: January 08, 2006 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea behind the story itself is excellent and very, very intriguing. How it is actually written out, though, is not. Aside from the handful of grammar problems, there is the poor sentence structure. The lack of proper punctuation makes the meaning of some sentences quite difficult to figure out at times. These are technical problems that could be easily fixed with the help of a proofreader. Other than that, there is also your writing style. It seems limited because you aren't too descriptive or detailed, and overall it makes the story feel rushed, incomplete and without substance. I suggest that while writing, you spend a bit more time carefully trying to capture and convey thoughts and emotions, and trying to depict more realistically any settings and actions. But, like I mentioned earlier, the premise is fascinating, and the only thing keeping me from enjoying it more is the writing itself. Hopefully you'll take some of my suggestions into consideration, because this story has true potential to be amazing and it only needs to be refined in some places to reach that potential.
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Reviewed By: baby panny chan On: January 08, 2006 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
getting better and better. please update soon!
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Title: Penitent
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Penitent
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: baby panny chan On: January 05, 2006 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is extremely good!! im really enjoying it. can you please write more?? i wanna know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: mirai shell On: January 04, 2006 22:55 CST
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this fic is pretty good. Make sure you throw in some interesting plot twists to keep us readers on our toes. Keep it up, girl!
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