| "The Hentai Deus" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: losermann [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha, very interesting science on this fanfic.... fun to read, not to mention
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Reviewed By: natsumi_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that you really had "voice" into this peice. Although in the anime, the couple turnout was much different. It had a very original theme to it which was the highlight and caught my eye. The story had a lot of typo or spelling issues that should be easy to solve if you have a dictionary and re-read what you wrote. The ending did end too soon though. Which was a 'bummer'. Overall good job =D
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Reviewed By: J.R.Karsten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 02:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Creative, consitering how there is no actuall rule on the Layered in terms of how Angelic Battles are really fought out. I do wish however you put more detail into your sex, it's mostly bland and not very much to imagion. Spelling and Grammer are good, however you did make the mistake of calling 'Angels' by 'Angelic Layers' which I don't think is correct. I think however you may want to re-do this fan fic and add more to it... you have a very solid base here, and this may not be your best work, but please consiter improving on this one, since there's a lot of possible ways to add more into it.
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