| "New year's Love confession" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: I hope they don't get busted!
Reviewed By: Yangyang aka Tenshi-senpai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, THIS IS AWSOME! I'm just GLAD that Prof. Barrel didn't caught them in the middle of their...*AHEM*...New Year's "celebration", otherwise, their asses would've been toasted!
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Title: Meh
Reviewed By: DrJ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad in my opinion u needed to have roll give megaman a blowjob before the sex but thats always an idea if u decide to add another chapter like the morning after :) or possibly later on if roll gets pregnant wouldnt that be interesting ^.^ Keep Writing
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Title: woah!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: twisted_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it write another one
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