| "Wolf princesses" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Hey again!
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! As I said, I really like your story, but at times it's hard to keep up with it. If you know what I mean? It makes some fast turnes. Maybe you ought to slow down just a bit. Like in the room in the fourth chapter. I don't really know what happened there since I couldn't keep up with the storys fast pace. And I notices that one of your 'ones' had turned into a 'once', but that's no big deal. Anyways, I still like the story, though I wish you would slow down a bit an explain more, make it a bit less 'jumpy' Kepp up the good work!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: spookagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story alot it is relly cool.
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Title: I really like it
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic and I think that it's going to be awsome to read the new chapter. Keep up the good work!
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