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| "My Prize" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: yodaihiro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aye seeing as how I don't get to read poetry very much written by you I just couldn't pass up the opportunity to review such a beautiful poem. I felt it connect a bit to What Words Cannot Say, though, despite the woman having emerald eyes instead of Aeka's eyes. Aye but Jin seemed really determined to win his prize...and when he was locked away from her spirit world he sent her hope by the wind. This was indeed a gorgeous poem...definitely going on my favorites list. ^_~
| Reviewed By: Raistlin Windblade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For just a random poem concerning Jin and an emerald orbed lady he has his determination set upon to protect and win even over Yuske, this is pretty damn good o.o I like the way the poem flows with the little story it tells and the way it weaves into his emotions of how he truely feels towards this particular mystery woman. Awesome job =3 I think you should write more poems when you get in the mood x3
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