Reviewed By: Shadows_Corpse On: January 20, 2006 00:53 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I have read your other version on FanFiction.net, that one I found to be cute, but over all lacking in good content. I find this newer one to be much more descriptive, better planed, and you seemed to have gotten the names and grammar correct this time, and I hope you will continue to write it
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