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| "A Future Shaped by the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Gin_Hayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its rare to find an author that writes as beautifully as you do. The conveyance of the characters feelings and the fullness of the plot and story line make for a read you cant quite pull yourself away from. Though I believe you could go further in depth with some of these stories and take them to greater hights. With one story you became an author I enjoyed and with every one I read I see someone to keep an eye on. Dont stop writing and dont let any bad reveiws get you down. You have at least one fan who enjoys your work immensly. Keep it up. ^.^
| Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i totally love this fic! nice job!
| Title: Lovely
Reviewed By: starxsurrender [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! I wasn't sure how much I'd enjoy this story but so far I'm in complete and total love with it! You've captured my attention with how beautifully you describe the scenes that are placed in the story and going into the emotions. I felt like they were my own for a while, especially those of the Silver Millenium and the tragic way it was played out. I did cry a little when Michiru died. I love how the characters are portrayed and they stay true to their personas in the Manga/Anime. The relationship between Haruka and Michiru is one I have always been a fan of as well and was severely bummed when they made the two cousins in the English dubbed version. All in all, a beautiful piece of work. I will be keeping an eye on this story.
| Reviewed By: YoukaiMusashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm one happy and awed reader, as usual :) Again, simply beautiful.Awesome visuals as always, gorgeous descriptions, wonderful characterization. And your Setsuna rocks, and I never paid much attention to her till this fic :) I have too many favorite scenes to choose from but I did find this absolutely wonderful: "...these strange memory-like visions were as much a part of herself as her own soul" You're so darn gifted with words! I hope I can learn from you one day! Poor Haruka :( I particularly loved her sense of undying love and the 'broken promise'and emptiness. Again, perfect balance, the emotions so intense, always leaving the reader craving for more. I'm cheering for Haruka & Michiru! You never cease to amaze me, I never tire of reading your works. Their first meeting was absolutely priceless, but I can't choose a fav scene! They're all fantastic! Keep it up girl! This is THE H/M fic I tell you! Once again, with feeling: YOU ROCK!
| Title: That the crap!
Reviewed By: Miyu_Starfighter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That rocked! I love H/M fics. They are so passionate and inspiring! You have a fan in me so more please!!!
| Title: I wasn't finished *pout*
Reviewed By: YoukaiMusashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahem, as I was saying before mm cut me off: I said it once, I'll say it again, I'll keep saying it: YOU ROCK! Your biggest fan and proud to be your KS! Keep rowing girl! *hands you endless supply of vanilla ice cream, lasagna, sushi and Chinese food* *bows again* YM
| Title: BEAUTIFUL
Reviewed By: YoukaiMusashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn you're Good. But you already know that ^.^ Another masterpiece by Trusuprise and I have the honor to be your first reviewer! *happyreviewerdance* What can I say? This fic is simply Beautiful. It's got everything and it's only just begun! Intensity, amazing character depth; you've not only given Haruka and Michiru more life than IMO they had in the anime or manga, but you've also made them Real for us. The descriptions and visuals are perfect, the intensity is such you make the reader feel what the characters are feeling. Intensity is the first word that comes to mind here. Michiru's dream, her confusion and determination...Haruka's dispair and insecurity...the balance is simply perfect. The story just flows, and it leaves the reader craving for more. Awesome job, girl! I bow to thee again! *bows repeatedly* One feels part of this story and I know other readers will feel this way, you can't help but being sucked into it, and it's wonderful to get lost in the world of words, and few people manage this too, to make you lose yourself in a story and See everything, not just as a reader but through the eyes of the characters. Michiru's dream...*happy sigh* beautifully erotic, you have a unique way with descriptions. So sweet and sensual, and incredibly Hot, too. Not many people can manage this either. You balanced all the emotions displayed in the chapter wonderfully. There's angst, drama, romance, humor...and this is only the 1st chapter! I said it once, I'll say it again, I' |
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