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| "Brother's Keeper" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that what I think it is...could it be...an update? I always thought that, given the right push, Kanako's mind would fall completely off the map. Of course in this case it seems she's perfectly in control of her mental faculties (outside the fact that she's as stubbornly delusional as Tatewaki Kuno). I'm glad you were able to inject a trace of humor with Su and her devices, even if the old 'phonecall-from-the-president' bit was a little cliche. Keep the updates coming. Believe it or not, you have at least one follower waiting patiently.
| Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally, I'm not a fan of darkfics. But I really liked your FMA/Eva piece, so I thought I'd give this one a try. I must say, it's pretty good so far (though I cringe at the thought of permanent disfigurment). Keep it up, I'd like to read at least one of your stories from beginning to end.
| Reviewed By: kidloco. On: May 11, 2006 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
is good is good i think need a upsgrade like fma evangelio i like for now two of you work
| Reviewed By: Jesusman [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest when i first read you summary i was conteplating on not reading it but now that i have im glad i decided to. (Even though i dont like to start reading unfinished stories because i wait forever for updates.) Anyways like most writer (including me) the readers have yet again been left with a cliff hanger so Please Please Post soon! im looking forward to it.
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