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Reviewed By: inu_luvver10 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 15:46 CDT
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OOHH I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Title: Holy Fdjslafnhs!
Reviewed By: XOMagickMoonOX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, for some reason, I didn't get the update for the last chapter, so sorry I didn't review it. ;o; Anyway, ohmyfuckinggod, this story is getting so good. I love your writing! It's amazing! I'm sooooo hooked on this story. I canNOT wait to see what happens next. I liked the use of Orochimaru. But I think I like his other-self better; I have this thing for the bad guys. =D Anyway, oh, Naruto's first time on a plane... that was hilarious. BUT! Ohmygod... he got hit by a car... fuck... that's soooooo sad. I almost started crying at that part! Poor modern-world-Sasuke! I-I... I don't know what else to say about that. I just need more of this story! Kakashi training Sasuke to function without his sight was nice; very IC, and very awesome. ^^ Oh boy oh boy oh boy, you have to update soon!! I am in LOVE with this story! And who ARE those two girls??? Why are they stirring up so much goddamn trouble?? I must know! Which means that you must UPDATE!! Please. :D
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Reviewed By: Memo-kun On: May 05, 2006 06:23 CDT
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Blah-I love this story. So glad you updated too. Damn you and your clifhangers! oh yeah I'm not logged in am I... Anyway... Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Anime_Angel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so HOT! Sasuke molested Naruto. It's so hot! keep writing. I can't wait for it to be Naruto in control. ^_^ -A
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Title: YOU ARE AMAZING
Reviewed By: XOMagickMoonOX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NYA!!!!!!!!! O.O OMG THIS STORY IS ABSO-FUCKING-LUTELY BRILLIANT!! It's perfect in pretty much every way, and you have me HOOKED. HOOKED, I tell you! YOU MUST UPDATE ASAP OR I WILL GO INSANE!! I have to know what happens next. This story is sheer brilliance. I love the angsty Sasuke... I mean, what would one think if they're boyfriend of...what, 5 years? suddenly didn't remember ANYTHING. o.o I would die. And I love Naruto's reaction to everything in Tokyo. The part with the bus was hilarious!! AND WHAT HAPPENED TO SASUKE'S EYES??!! He's not going to *stay* blind forever, is he?? Ohmygod, that would be so sad.... so maybe it's a good thing. Angst is good. ^^ But also sad. It's emotional, and I like it. Awww, Sasuke was begging for Naruto in his sleep.... and then the *other* Sasuke took advantage of Naruto!! XD YAOI FOREVA!!! As I said, this story is perfect. I want to know who the little girl in the forest was, and I want to know ... WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON! Which is why you MUST update ASAP. I need more of this story; I'm addicted! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter Five: YEAH! You updated and super fast too! SCORE! I is so happy. I wonder when the smex shall begin...Haha...Just kidding...Sort of. So Sasuke and Naruto will go on a random ass adventure...And...Sasuke...(the real one) is dodging...rubber...balls. Haha. Okay I am done with the perverted-ness...Sort of. :D
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So basically I love this story... And... Love it. :D MUY bien. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: DragonKeeperMihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God! This story so rox my sox! You have to update soon! I must know what happend next!
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Title: interesting...
Reviewed By: DarkDemon53 (when signed in) On: February 28, 2006 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very interesting chapter. Hope you update soon.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 10:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T.T Sasuke molested Naruto. Who could blame hime though? Naruto is so smexy. Anyway, good fanfic. Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaaay!! ^^ great chapter! now sasuke knows MUAHAHA!! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: INTERWEB On: January 16, 2006 17:23 CST
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midorimori would be a correct name, no fear, you din't break any rules of Japanese grammer. I lived in a the Aomori (blue forest) district of Japan for a while, there was no 'no' in it, so I'm certain midorimori would be correct.
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Reviewed By: DBC13 On: January 09, 2006 16:51 CST
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EVIL CLIFFHANGERS!!! Poor Sasuke... Naruto hurt his feelings. Me: *drags Naruto off* You're gonna pay for hurting Sasuke's feelings Naruto: Save me!!! Sasuke: ummm *blink*
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 20:23 CST
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*twitch* need. . .more. . .*twitch* I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! TT_TT It's really good and I can't wait to see all of whats going to happen!
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 02:09 CST
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I like it. But your not really done are you? I still want to know what happens. O well I hope you'll think about adding more to it.
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