| "True Colors" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Buffy_Minamoji On: April 01, 2006 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was garet! You have to write more and put in more romance. It's so cute to sasuke all caering and loveing, even if it means his gay. I love this story. Now baka you better finnish this story or I'll be mad.
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Reviewed By: kiki14 (not logged in) On: January 21, 2006 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, you shoudl defianetly continue! I love the whole angst thing with Naruto, though it seemed a bit rushed on the suicide aspect, and Sasuke seems a little out of character. But hey, who knows what he's really like inside he own mind? I think you should update! I would really appreciate it! Go Sasuke/Naruto! WOOT!
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: January 12, 2006 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF! BAKA WRITE MORE! Plz............!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: nicha On: January 10, 2006 09:55 CST
Comment/Review:
what the hell? write more...
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 05:33 CST
Comment/Review:
It's good. You should make the chaps longer. I hope that you add more. Good work and keep em coming.
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Title: well, its ok.
Reviewed By: King without a crown On: January 06, 2006 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good, but the chapters need 2 be longer, back when i wrote i wrote chapters of atleast 6500 words each... i think you should continue this.
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Reviewed By: kitsunetears [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, im sorry i can't give you any useful feedback because i'm still new to naruto. But from a reader's perspective your fic keeps the reader interested, but there isn't as much detail as there could be so people might have questions like was there a specific reason naruto was crying? or what did sasuke's note say and was it important? did that mean anything or am i just rambling? anyway good fic more detail is appreciated. keep writing :)
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Reviewed By: kady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 16:59 CST
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very good story ^-^. good choice of the song, it was very comfertable to read too. you should try to make the chapters longer. other than that... more please ^-^
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