| "Alchemy and Saiyans" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: November 12, 2006 10:16 CST
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That was a good chapter. I wonder what the saiyens(not sure i spelled that right) are going to do. Oh, and is Goku going to appear? And are you going to make the saiyens(again not sure i spelled that right) able to teleport to Ed's world? I really do wonder how everyone's going to react if Vageta went berserk around the place.
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: September 15, 2006 15:05 CDT
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r u going to update anytime soon cause ur taking a little longer to update.
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: September 15, 2006 15:05 CDT
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r u going to update anytime soon cause ur taking a little longer to update.
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 17, 2006 20:35 CDT
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*rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl* holy crap that was rather funny!!! this was a really good chapter and poor Mustang he got a bowl of cheerios cereal dropped on his head. :P
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad so far, though not too original. I wish the chapters were a little longer, then again you update pretty frequently. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 08, 2006 22:41 CDT
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Wow that was rather funny! u really should keep track on updating ur story for this its really good.
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Reviewed By: kidloco [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 20:41 CDT
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XD that was SO DAMN FUNNY LOL LOL LOL winry and her wrench of terror was a rules XD thanks for upsgrading ^^
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Title: UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 07, 2006 15:27 CDT
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dude u seriously need to update its really frustrating cuz this is a pretty good fic and u already got more reviews from other ppl so UPDATE ALREADY!!!!
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Title: upgrade
Reviewed By: kidloco. On: June 09, 2006 22:11 CDT
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please upgrade.... :p
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Reviewed By: kidloco. On: May 27, 2006 22:17 CDT
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please finish i have rad that like 3 week and need know what happen after ed talk to al and roy and know aobut otehr universe and ect please dont forget aobut the fan who read that is funny jeje
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Reviewed By: Minied On: May 12, 2006 19:31 CDT
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It's great! Please give me more of this story. *been hooked with line and sinker*
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Reviewed By: Trunks lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 4 was so funny! Please postthe next chapter(s) I'm begging you!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 24, 2006 15:16 CDT
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Man chapter 4 was funny!! the way they talked back and forth and Ed completely ignored Roy and Al when Vegeta broke the GR. I also like the parts where you hear the clang. Anyway I dont hav any stories posted on this site cause i havnt been on here for a long time but ill post one soon. and just to tell u u mite not kno the one anime that im posting its called Juvenile Orion u hav to read the manga if u want to read my story its only five books but its a really good series.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 17, 2006 11:38 CDT
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This is really good keep it up and i think im ur only fan for now cuz i see that my last comment is still alone. well anyway does Ed show the DBZ's his automail arm and leg? and i cant wait to see the match between Yamcha and Ed! ^^
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 13, 2006 17:13 CDT
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dude u really need to update......this story is good! and to me i dont think u should hook Ed up with any of the DBZ girls cuz no one seems to fit him.......
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