| "Alchemy and Saiyans" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: December 12, 2006 18:35 CST
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uummmmmmmmm. that was rather interesting, though the scenes where Riza chased Havoc was funny! keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 18:44 CST
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egeta being a smartass while stealing popcorn out of the air? Hmmm, amusing *cracks grin* Anyway, DBZ is overpowered, overrated, and stupid. *said sarcastistaclly* Still, I loved it up through Cel saga, and this one is pretty good, so I like. Keep on writing, especially more multiversal hijinks. Now, to try my own intergalactic teleporter *pulls gun over circular pad in middle of warehouse building* "ready?" "Yeah" "THen let the mating begin!" "WHAT?!?!" *tentacle pops through metal pad in the warehouse floor and grabs assistant with red hair and glasses, and pulls him in* "MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!" Please, continue, so I may add my own input. And on top of that, Vegita being a prankster, that is something I wouldn't think of, stealing popcorn in fun. Please continue with your normal lives.
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: kidloco [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 16:57 CST
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jajajajajajaja taht was sooo damn funny!!!!! jajajaja is mak emy laught to much almosth spit my oranje juice forn my nose jajajajajajajaja that was priceless XD more more more and the end wwas good ^^ but the meeting ball of cherrie madnes for ed was funny jajaja hey what do havoc to riza to get her madness and fire her weapons? that was good cap my firned ^^ continue continue pleaseeee need more Full DB alchemist madness xD
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Reviewed By: Lomeeriel On: November 13, 2006 11:07 CST
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I really liked your fic. I think its hillarious at times. Hopefully you will keep it going because I would really like to know what happens. Don't let it die and keep up the good work!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: kidloco [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 15:49 CST
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what can be? lol go to write noe girl and wait be long ok XD :p
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: November 12, 2006 10:16 CST
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That was a good chapter. I wonder what the saiyens(not sure i spelled that right) are going to do. Oh, and is Goku going to appear? And are you going to make the saiyens(again not sure i spelled that right) able to teleport to Ed's world? I really do wonder how everyone's going to react if Vageta went berserk around the place.
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: September 15, 2006 15:05 CDT
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r u going to update anytime soon cause ur taking a little longer to update.
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: September 15, 2006 15:05 CDT
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r u going to update anytime soon cause ur taking a little longer to update.
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 17, 2006 20:35 CDT
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*rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl* holy crap that was rather funny!!! this was a really good chapter and poor Mustang he got a bowl of cheerios cereal dropped on his head. :P
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad so far, though not too original. I wish the chapters were a little longer, then again you update pretty frequently. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 08, 2006 22:41 CDT
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Wow that was rather funny! u really should keep track on updating ur story for this its really good.
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Reviewed By: kidloco [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 20:41 CDT
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XD that was SO DAMN FUNNY LOL LOL LOL winry and her wrench of terror was a rules XD thanks for upsgrading ^^
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Title: UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 07, 2006 15:27 CDT
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dude u seriously need to update its really frustrating cuz this is a pretty good fic and u already got more reviews from other ppl so UPDATE ALREADY!!!!
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Title: upgrade
Reviewed By: kidloco. On: June 09, 2006 22:11 CDT
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please upgrade.... :p
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Reviewed By: kidloco. On: May 27, 2006 22:17 CDT
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please finish i have rad that like 3 week and need know what happen after ed talk to al and roy and know aobut otehr universe and ect please dont forget aobut the fan who read that is funny jeje
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