| "The Love of A Neko; The Heart of an Inu" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: BLUB BLUB BLUB On: August 04, 2009 09:04 CDT
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never mind... phone.... got it....
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Reviewed By: BLUB BLUB BLUB On: August 03, 2009 21:50 CDT
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76933? RoyEd? How?
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Title: Interesting.
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain(Member, but not signed in and too lazy to do so-_-) On: June 12, 2006 02:11 CDT
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This is an interesting fic. However, you need to space your chapters better. They get just a little confusing and hard to read sometimes. Just a thought, eh? Perhaps that's just your style. Please read my story, FullMetal Wolf. I think you'll like it. New bandwagon to jump on as well. I liked this, and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Schitz On: February 18, 2006 02:23 CST
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I have a tuff time ratin' things, but I'll tell ya this, I'm getting loads of laughs. Please update soon! The only beef I have is that there isn't alot of detail, please add more detail! and please make the chaps a little longer! Schitz,
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Reviewed By: chibi -chan On: January 20, 2006 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! to the X -treem!!! It's funny!!! Pleeeeeeeease write more^-^KITTY-ED IS SO CUTE!!!
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Reviewed By: chibi -chan On: January 20, 2006 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! to the X -treem!!! It's funny yet mysterious : )
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Title: 2md Reveiew
Reviewed By: Lilium logged Off On: January 20, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapters are getting funnier and funnier! I cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter :3 -Lilium_shadow
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Reviewed By: Lilium_Shadow On: January 12, 2006 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative ^-^ me likies the thought of a Cat-Ed :D *pokes* more chapters!
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Reviewed By: kiki14 (not logged in) On: January 11, 2006 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very original idea. I've been reading a lot of Full Metal Alchemist fan-ficsm but yours is the first where ED is turned into a chimera! I'm sure there are others out there, but there can't be to many. I enjoyed reading it and i can't wait to hear what happens next. I'm trying to figure out if Leon hit G-something (are those their names?) at the end or if one of them hit Ed and he was the one who fell to the floor, but it seems more likely that Ed had already fallen down. Hmmmmmmmm...... where was Al during all this i wonder? I bet he'll love it that Ed's part kitty now! I hope Roy feels bad ofr sending poor Ed out by himself. It wouldn't have happened if he had back up!.......Well, maybe it still would have but..... I like seeing Mustang look guilty. I can't wait for your next chapter! Too many questions too little time to write, ne? Well, I guess I'm your first review! Yay! Keep up the good work!
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