| "Red Eyes, Warm Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: mamosere On: April 30, 2012 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. I'ts a good story as usual. Just want you to know that I've enjoyed reading this. |
Reviewed By: ÖÖNVÍN On: April 10, 2012 23:37 EDT
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Loved it! |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2011 00:41 EDT
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Yay I loved this...very sweet and happy. |
Reviewed By: Shortsh1t [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2011 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story defenantly one of the ones I can read over and over agean. |
Title: PLEASE CONTINUE
Reviewed By: Nessarie88 On: January 28, 2011 08:05 EST
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WOW! That was AWESOME! You should definitely consider continuing! You've left it open for numerous plot opportunities! My first thought was, "what if the birth control failed??" I mean, think about it: even in normal situations, the pill is subject to a 5 percent failure rate. That being said, that's up against normal, HUMAN sperm - would it really be up to defending against SUPER DEMONIC sperm?? Never mind the fact that Inuyasha is a DOG demon, and dogs (and I have to assume their demonic counterparts) usually only mate to breed (and given the way you've described his orgasms, conception seems to be what his body is striving for, even if his mind knows better). And I've never really read a [good] fic where Kagome is pregnant WHILE Naraku - let alone Kikyo - is still alive. It's got so much potential, and I know you could write it amazingly! You're such an amazing author! PLEASE consider continuing with this story, it's so awesome, and I would LOVE to see more! ~Ness Nessarie88@aim.com |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 19:26 EST
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Was just rereading this story, it's still one of my favorites, and I noticed something I didn't catch the first time I read the revised edition. In the first chapter, when Inuyasha offers Kagome his arm to drink his blood her thoughts showed that while she knew it was important, she didn't know exactly what it would mean. She even wondered if she would turn into a youkai by doing so. But in the following chapters it is repeatedly mentioned that she had spoken with Sango and knew about the blood bond and what it entailed. I just thought I should point that out as it is a bit of a plot point. But other than that this story is still an excellent read. |
Reviewed By: sexymckittington [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2010 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was by far the best InuYasha fan fic I've ever read! Lol makes mine seem like crap in comparisson. I can't believe how long and derailed your story was, it was truely amazing and a delight to read! Thankyou by the way for the detailed reviews of my story I really apruciated the time and effort it took to write them. I am definitly going to read all your other Inu fics InuKags forever
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2010 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the 'clean-up job' you did, lol. I think it smoothed the flow of the story a bit. Still an absolute favorite! Amber
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: September 19, 2010 05:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
N'aww that was sweet in a hentai way lol i liked it =]
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Title: Hi again xD
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2010 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!!! I liked it a lot xD jijijiji it's very funny that thing about the locking together jijiji xD well see ya in you're next fic xD jijiji take care byebye
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2010 16:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story when I first read it, I love it even more now. The changes definitely improved the story, made it flow better. I especially liked the increased detail, such as Kagome now knowing about what the bond means (I could be wrong but I don't think she knew in the original version) and the increased detail at the end. Great job, and I can't help but wonder if the fact that you cleaned it up means there will be a sequel?
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2010 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow it seems like a very good idea to take your old fics and bring them back with life now xD this fic was so great, last night I had to go to sleep, so i didn't finished or write review xD jijijiji I liked the idea a lot, and it wasn't rape xD jijiji just a bit pushy for Kagome, but it don't think it was nothing more xD what was funny was the part when the got trapped together xD jijiji I've always wonder about it, and this it's just the second time i find it in a fic xD I'll keep reading xD jijiji
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! love the lemons
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2010 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. I loved this story. I have never believed that Inuyasha would hurt Kagome if he transformed. I love how you showed their feelings and Inuyasha's fears that he had raped her. I'm glad Kagome realized it wasn't really rape because she loved him and was willing. Are you going to write a sequel? I would love to read it.
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww that was cute!!!
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