| "FMA Poetry Jam" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Two Alchemists, One Mistake
Reviewed By: joyfulmusic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta go read fanfic now. Bye! Oh yeah and add more poems!!!
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Title: A Painful Realization
Reviewed By: joyfulmusic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I've got another story to read! How am I supposed to finish the one I'm writing if you get me hooked on someone elses? Oh well, I'll go read it anyway. I don't start posting mine until they're done anyway so no one will care! I'm giving you a 9 on the last two because you're making me read! :) If it weren't for that it'd be a 10.
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Title: Human Serpent-Crucified Woman
Reviewed By: joyfulmusic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad I know who she is! It's a sad poem. But now I'm afraid that you may be ahead of me in the story line! I sure hope you're watching on Adult Swim and haven't seen the whole thing!
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Title: From The Second Story Window
Reviewed By: joyfulmusic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And with a wrench, it's you I'll fight. That line is so funny! I love the poem! But is it a sisterly love or is it more? Maybe I'll learn in some of your other poems.
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Reviewed By: joyfulmusic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet! Not nearly as sad as the first. I like it! By the way Spelling & Grammar How on earth should I know? You've read some of my work so you should realize English is only my best language, not my best subject! Actually, English is my only language.
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Reviewed By: joyfulmusic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate doing the rating thing. It's hard because I have to compare it to what I've read in the past. Oh well I did it anyway because I like getting rated! Now what can I say about this poem. WONDERFUL! And yet so very sad. (sniff sniff)
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Title: HUZZAH!!!
Reviewed By: MAIDEN OF TIME AND SPACE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mega glomps you* THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! Eve/Angela: *glomp you* Ed: *blushing at Eve*
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Title: It ish I Kat!
Reviewed By: MAIDEN OF TIME AND SPACE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is now sobbing* YOUR POEMS MAKE ME CRY!! I love them! Angela: *pats Kat on the back* There There.. Eve: *reading Ed's poem* I'm not gonna cry..I'm not....*breaks out crying* me: *calms down* Update more! Would be cool if Angela and Eve were really in Fullmetal Alchemist. The Ed and Al could write poems to them! Angela: *sighs* It would never happen though,kat-chan. Eve: -_- Yeah, we're stuck with you for life. Kat: -_- I feel very insulted now...
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