| "Whenever you call" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're killing me, softly!!!!!!!!!! God, you make me want to hate you SO MUCH! Yet I can't!!!! Moar chapters =D I demandz it, with a cherry ontop!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: June 18, 2006 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
so sweet and mushy xD!
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Reviewed By: eshfemme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how you portray the conflict that Vegeta faces regarding Bulma. It's nice to see your take on how Bulma handles their relationship. It's not too lovey-dovey and not too abrasive either. It's pretty original. I hope you will keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: January 07, 2006 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very well written, and very true to the cannon story. I enjoy how it sums up the logic of their relationship in one shot, while keeping Vegeta and Bulma in character.
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