| "A Gift with Blue Hair" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Poor Asuka
Reviewed By: KoroZwei On: May 27, 2006 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I found the premise interesting, the story intriguing...and then I saw that this is a "Bash Asuka" archetype. I am not a Shinji/Asuka shipper, in fact I welcome almost all pairings in Eva, however I have a strong opinion against writers who go out of their way to bash a particular character because they dislike them. Your story would be a lot better if you treated all the characters (even Asuka) fairly.
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Reviewed By: Zenithar On: January 07, 2006 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. Only one drawback is that its got a poor format. Otherwise its good
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Reviewed By: mg On: January 07, 2006 15:22 CST
Comment/Review:
bout time...i read the first two chapters on ff.net but i couldn't find it any more...need more chapters..
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Reviewed By: Hakun(NSI) On: January 07, 2006 06:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. liked the idea of Rei attacking asuka. need more and soon please
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