Reviewed By:anil495 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2011 11:54 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I liked how you worked it in to fit the beginning. The only thing that didn't fit is that Ryoko knows Katsuhiko is Yosho even though in in the OAV's she doesn't know he's Yosho. That was shown when Yosho caught her fist and she was confused. Other than that I greatly enjoyed your story.
