| "Fragile: Handle With Care" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: bishifangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
FINALLY! I'm glad to come across someone else that understands the simple fact IF THE STORY HAS A WARNING ON IT THAT IT CONTAINS MATERIAL YOU DON'T LIKE THEN DON'T CLICK ON IT!!! that said...I've only read the prologue so far but from what I've read I really like your style of writing.
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Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The lemon may have been a pain to write but you did it very well (ie: I now have very happy pictures running through my perverted little head ^^). This is well written and it suprised me that it was Kakashi who broke, I was expecting Iruka. That gets high marks for originality/creativity! You are a very good writer and I am eagerly awaiting your next update!
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Reviewed By: sano s. sagara On: April 28, 2006 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked the fic, in a few places it was confusing, but... damn. it was really good. oh, and i thought your lemon was very tasteful, not to explicet, but not too fluffy. keep up the fic!
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Reviewed By: Miyo-chan On: March 04, 2006 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! Write more pwease! Pwease! Pwease!!! * gets hit over the head by friend * Shut up! I'm sure she doesn't wanna hear you whining... Me: * whimpers * Yes... Of course... We must leave... PWEASE!!!! * gets hit on the head again *
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Reviewed By: kaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 19:50 CST
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Well, my interest has certainly been piqued. Definitely continue to work on this piece. I'd like to see how it comes along.
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Reviewed By: sairu On: January 10, 2006 01:38 CST
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sori i havent read da fic yet but ill review again after i do. i just want to say keep updating. i reali want to read a kakairu fic and they are so hard to find .thanx
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Title: OOPS! sorry!
Reviewed By: Mimi Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 15:01 CST
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I'm sorry about that second review, it was a mistake, i meant it for another story. I'm soo sorry about that!! I really didn't mean to :( I don't know what good it'll do, but I'll recommend this story in the next update for my own story. Again, sorry for my mistake.
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Reviewed By: Mimi Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story! I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm having a lot of fun reading this story. The fighting and peaceful breakfast part was awesome, it surprised me how well it blended together. Sasuke is a bit of a mystery in this fic, I like not really knowing what's behind his actions. Does he love Sakura, or is it just some possessive kick? And the pace of Kakashi and Sakura's relationship is perfect, so much tension! This fic is looking wonderful so far, each chapter gets better and better. Great job!
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Title: Really good!
Reviewed By: Mimi Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know all 10's may seem a bit crazy, but this is actually a very good fic! I can't wait to see what happens next, even though it makes me soooo sad because it doesn't look like things are gonna go well for the two of them :( I like how things aren't in chronological order, it shakes things up a bit, and makes your story more original. And that lemon was very well done, I imagine that they've really hard to write - that's why i've never even tried. You pulled it off perfectly though, good job! This story looks really good, keep it coming! :)
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