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Title: one more chap please?
Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it. although i want to read what happens when they get home. *blushes* can you write a chap on what happens when they get home? *blushes* you leave us wanting more!!
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Reviewed By: mischievous angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really hot! I loved it!
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Title: yays
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 05:02 CST
Comment/Review:
wow.. this is one of the best one-shots i have ever read... you should consider making it inot a actual story.., with a plot bigger then shoes.. but that was the cutest idea!!!!!! the shoes.. lol.. loved it... oks well till next time... Ja Ne ~Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Azshara [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 02:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Gyaa! Gottta love hair that's easy to hold on to. I can't wipe the grin off my face. :D
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: June 21, 2006 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
xD this one's my favourite! you're great at one-shots!! especially this pairing ^.~
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Reviewed By: Thankies On: April 26, 2006 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh that was fun. That was fun and very very good! Hee. Loved that last line, too! Thanks for the enjoyable read!
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Reviewed By: Krazy-Kilala (too lazy to sign in :/ ) On: January 24, 2006 14:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I hate it when someone writes a great fanfiction-even a oneshot-and people don't comment. This was a great Sensual Phrase fanfiction! I must say, you need to write more!
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Title: Hot!
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that a very hot One-Shot. Pretty much in character for all, and thank you for clicking that spell-check button on your word program. No big gaping areas of needed improvement. I loved the line where he dropped the phone. That action said more than any words.
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