| "Love and Battles in the Village Hidden in the Fog" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: seiko92 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
reat story update soon plz
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs alot of work. Good basic start But you really need to expand your information in each chapter.
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Title: impressive
Reviewed By: akashi471 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you update soon. I really like comedy/romance. wohoo!!
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Reviewed By: Narutos Inner Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTE LOVE IT! Keep up the good work.
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Title: hi~
Reviewed By: HieiIsMineToGlomp07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again i must say that i liked this. it does show great potential. Just keep up the good work and i'll see you next time.
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Title: Not Bad
Reviewed By: Tatsudoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since you gave me such a great review on my own fic I decided to reward you by reviewing yours. Out of the three that I read I must say that this one shows the most potential. It will be interesting how things turn out! If I was to make one suggestion it would be to space out your paragraphs a bit. Putting them in large clusters can be harmful for the readers eyes. They can sometimes loose their place then have to try and find it. It can also make your fic look more professional and longer to boot! All in all this fic was pretty good and I look forward to the update! I'll even put this in my favorites.
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Title: calm down
Reviewed By: HieiIsMineToGlomp07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me again! Okay just calm down. I know the feeling of getting no reviews. when i first put out my fic Tears i didn't get any reviews for a while. then i came back under the name I'm under now, fixed some of the story and now look at my boards. My only advice is to make a really catchy summary to pull in the readers. anyways I like this update soon!
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Title: MY GOD PEOPLE!!!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 20:52 CST
Comment/Review:
DAMN IT, DAMN IT, DAMN IT!! I ASK NICELY FOR YOU TO REVIEW AND NOT EVEN ONE! \_/# MY GOD! HOW MUCH MORE DO I HAVE TO ASK?! THIS IS REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, IMPORTANT TO ME! I NEED REVIEWS! Please...
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