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| "What to do When You're Bored in a Chat Room" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Spinner2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's awesome please continue it!
| Reviewed By: Korune On: October 19, 2006 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has somehow... Intriqued me... At first I thought this only to be a rather fun (and good) lemony fic, but the direction it turned interrests me now. Not that I wasn't interrested in the lemon... Your dominant Hisoka was to die for! I'm wondering what your brain is doing, cause some things certainly have me stumped though. ((damn pink-haired girls!)) Oh, but not in a bad way! ^_^* I just find myself trying to fill in things in some places and trying to predict the direction, that's all. And I do like the POV, btw. Though it isn't uncommon, your way of being Hisoka is great. I like his POV in these type fics normally. He tends to have so many things running through his head that it's a very good place to make things happen in fics, in my opinion. There is just so much that you can do in that POV. I would like to see the direction this story goes, really I would, because it's been a while since I've actually thought about reading something with a little mystery to it. I think the last mystery one I read was a Petshop of Horrors fic... A while back... **shruggs** Anyways, yeah... I'll stop here now since I'm going on only a few hours of sleep right now. Seems I always decide to give a review to a fic when I'm ready to pass out! Though I read the fic in full wakefulness... I need to make a note to myself to give review directly after reading the fic instead of waiting a few hours or so... **sighs** Welp! Hope others review to encourage you to be motivated to continue on this one. ^_^* And if I repeated myself in places, I blame it on my insomnia and noisey neighbors. -_-; One of these days I think I'm going to snap. LOL
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