| "The Hallows" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 23:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Kikyo was alway a little trashy hoe. Poor Kagome she was fun too. Inuyasha was probably mad too. And Rin went MIA with who I wonder. Please write soon!
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Reviewed By: Teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe man I'm second to review. and just let me tell you that this story is hhhhhooooooottttttt!!!!! I was drooling over Inuyasha and Miroku. I think I'm still drooling now. Oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh man they were hot. So um hurry up and update cause the scene is hot! I s Kikyo going out with Inuyasha. And for some reason I can't see Kikyo as a slut even though I loathe her. But I still think that this story rocks! I mean Sango and Kagome living in the same apartment next to some hotties. You can't tell me from those few words that this is a hot story. I mean wow. Where you came up with the ideas for this story I have no clue. But I want to share your brain. Oh and please update. Thankyou
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh *squeals* I'm the first review! Okay I am enjoying your fic a lot so far and I can't wait to read more. You are doing a very good job with the grammar and making things make sense but still enjoyable at all times. By the way, is this gonna be one where Inuyasha dumps Kikyo for Kagome; Kagome is gonna get with someone, make Inuyasha jealous, and then he tries to get her after he gets rid of Kikyo; or something totally different? I am not trying to be a pest or anything ,I'm just curious. Sakag
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