| "A Summer to Remember" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: A Summer yo Remember
Reviewed By: dukesgirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a fantastic story. i also loved ur sense of humor in it, keep the stories comin, pleaz?
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 06:43 CST
Comment/Review:
well it sounds done, but you didn't put the little 'The End' or 'Fin' or anything, so I'm still very hopefull for more! you've made an addict outta me!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 06:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This 10 is for your lemon. I kinda went on a rant and forgot to put it in before I clicked, but that lemon was hella hot. I pray the last chappie coming up isn't the last one...
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 06:35 CST
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okay, I know it's not the end because I have another chappie to read, and I am eternally grateful that you don't keep us hanging with nail biting cliffies, but I'm desperat to know where and how you come up with such great lines! 'We can't die tomorrow. I can't lose this.' Dearie, I love you, but I am stealing this line for a story I've been slaving over for months. I have the PERFECT place to put it, and normally I would ask and beg and bribe you shamelessly, but you'll just have to forgive me because the damn thing is due in about 2 days and I won't be online again until it's over. I hope you won't be mad at me and can accept knowing that you are one of my FAVORITE authors EVER as a form of payment since I is broke. NOW on to the next chapter and then...valiantly attack the last 4 pages of my chapter from hell and hope to make some headway before going to bed!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 06:11 CST
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'If all our arguments are going to end with him kissing the daylights outta me, it might almost be worth him being a high and mighty prick. Almost.' Absolute. Greatest. Line. EVER.I am so hooked on this story....now to go read the other two chappies you posted...hehehehehehehe.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 06:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"you are my other, show some manners." That is SUCH an awesome line! squeee! I've been offline for awhile so I get to read 4 chappies all at once YAY!
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great and it even has lemon. I love this story it's so cute and original. It's prefect.
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah two updates within a two day span, it's wonderful. I loved the brief lime/lemon in chapter four. I couldn't help but get all fan girl when I read the interaction between Jou and Kaiba at the end of this chapter. I'll like to see Kaiba force Jou to go with him, I can only imagine the bruises. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm dying over here. This story is too great and it's so original it's killing me. I'm not usually one for 1st POV but I just can't get enough of this, I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I soooo want more of this story immediately! This is one of the most unique story ideas I've ever read and I'm going crazy waiting for the next chapter to post. Hurry!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really been enjoying this story so far, I anxiously await the next installment.
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no I want more. It's been a while since I found a KxJ I've wanted to read and it's even in 1st POV, I never read those. You got me hooked and there's no looking back I love it.
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