| "An Unexpected Gift of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 01:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Vegeta didn't seem OOC at all and Bulma's reaction was quite in character and right in line with that of a protective mother's.
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great! plz update soon! make the chapters a little longer plz..
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Reviewed By: soyamiso [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 22:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
She gave all that to him? Did he do the same for her?
Fic stands well all on its own, but do whatever makes you happy. |
Reviewed By: Crowsi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic, one of the best I've read! The only thing that could make it better would be a sequal! |
Reviewed By: Meow On: June 19, 2002 06:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No I didn't think Vegeta was ooc, and I'm quite picky about that kind of thing. Very well done. I enjoyed every minute. Write the sequel already! :p |
Reviewed By: Goat On: June 03, 2002 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want the sequel! |
Reviewed By: Diablesse [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2002 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tee-hee, I love this fic ^^' Vegeta wasn't OOC at all, neither was Bulma. Dickweed... *sniggers* ^_- |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 25, 2002 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good. I believe a lemony sequel would be in order ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Sara On: April 25, 2002 16:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sequel! |
Reviewed By: LeChibiUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2002 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please do countinue! It's really great so far. I like it a lot. ^_^ *peace out* |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2002 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL that dick weed comment was funny. :D any way i liked you fic well ok i like both of them.
good work,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: February 18, 2002 02:18 CST
Comment/Review:
haha pretty cute! :) dickweed, huh? :) i hope to read more from you in the future! |
Reviewed By: Layla On: April 25, 2002 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good.You should defenetely write a sequel.U go girl!!!!(^_^; |
