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| "I Just Want To Be With You" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: La!
Reviewed By: kate222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was pretty good!! I can't wait to know what happens next! Keep it up!
| Title: Fair..
Reviewed By: ash_night [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a fair Fic.An interesting character, though she boarders on being mary-sueish.A reasonably fair Pairing, and I can't say I'm not glad you didn't break up one of the other couples.Characters are kept in character most of the time, though for the moment, the entire fic is a tad dull.I'm sure that will get better ocne you're ready to pull in X.A.N.A. All in all, a decend fic, something worth following up on.
| Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Kivalle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. A decent Code Lyoko fic, one of the few on here. You have an interesting style of writing, although there were a few grammar and writing things I can let go. (But by the by, in a story, when there's a new speaker it starts a new paragraph/line.) A good idea, this Sophie character of yours. I'd like to see how XANA comes into this, and whether they show her Lyoko or not. I'll be waiting.
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