| "My Lonely Heart Beats" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: ***KIRA*** On: September 09, 2008 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I finally found this story again i read your story i few years back and i cried when i read it T^T and i atill do when i read it =(did you discontinue the story ??? if you did iam ganna cry cus i loved your story xD please update soon !!~!!!
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Reviewed By: shinkamigrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 13:08 CST
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I absolutely love what you have written so far. You must continue, for the sake of your fans! I cried when I read this, and it's so well written that it could even fit into the original plot (if that's not already the case...) Of course my crying wasnt helped by the fact that I just happened to have Orenji no Taiyou by Gackt and Hyde on repeat. But I digress. You must continue! Please? *big puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 06:42 CST
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You are a completely amazing writer, feel my jealousy come off me in waves! I'm also happy though, because I get to read the wonderfulness! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: shanshan On: January 22, 2007 19:06 CST
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omg....that was the best story i have ever read in my life! That was the first time i have ever cried from a story! u must update! please,PLEASE! IM BEGGING U WITH EVERY PART OF MY SOLE! please...
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Reviewed By: raykay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi...Maybe not On: June 04, 2006 23:23 CDT
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UPDATE!!! please. i beg of you. I would love oyu for ever
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Reviewed By: Solar Angel On: May 18, 2006 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow normaly I don't go for the dark twisty stories but I must say you've got me hooked. Please keep going I'd really like to know what's going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: randomHime On: March 23, 2006 16:32 CST
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This is a beautifully tragic Naruto fic. I like the idea of Naruto's scars a lot. I might use the idea of him being scarred. It adds a great effect. Don't worry, my plots AU and is a SasuNaru, but aren't all Naruto fics like that? But this is really one of my favorite Naruto fics, its orginal and well written. I usually don't rate it, but this is one of those fics that you feel obligated to. Please continue, you're a brilliant writer!
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Reviewed By: spriggan_d [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good lord! that second chapter blew my mind out of the water! i never expected that. nice job!
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Reviewed By: rens_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. i loved it. you have got to finish it. Naru/Sasu is one of my faves.
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Reviewed By: the REAL glasses freak & bloody_black_valentine ( MM just deleted me tht's all ^^ ) On: February 15, 2006 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! th was so OMG! holy crap u have to write more!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz *gets down on knees & begs* PLZZZZZZZZZ *grabs author's shirt & wile & screa* AHHHH U HAVE 2 WRITE MORE PLZZZZZZZZ lol, ok tht was fun ^^, um, anyway, i disturbing o.O lmao xD & on Valentines Day 2 read this & want u 2 go on lmao xD
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Title: The All-fearing Peppy Mistress! (buwahahaha!)
Reviewed By: Pepp On: January 19, 2006 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was soooooooooo happy to see this story updated! I was do happy, I was jumping around in my seat! ^^ But then... u-u I read it! It was soooooooo sad! As I type this, I'm bawling my eyes out! *cries* What a horrible nightmare! Poor Naru-chan! (inside snicker *cough* uh, back to the crying...) I can't ever imagine all the pain he's going through! You write it so well, its amazing! But sad and cruel for poor Naru-chan too! WAAAA!!!! And what Sasuke did? Well... the dead Sasuke, at least! And the lyrics! Where'd you find them again? They were beautiful! They fit the chapter so well, I think! I was so moved!!!!!!!! I just wanna hold Naru-chan and squuueeezzzeeeeee him and huuuuuuuuuuuuugggggggggg him! The poor thing! And your err... discriptive details about the blood? >.< Ewwww!!!! (shivers) If theres one thing I hate in the world, its bugs and the sight of blood.... *deadbanned* Yes, I realize that I counted wrong... ^^lol But seriously! I loved the chapter! I hope things get better for Naruto soon! *sniffles* If they don't, I don't know what I'd do!!!! *squeezes Naruto plushie tightly* I wonder what Sasuke is going to do in the next chapter? Is Naruto gonna get flashbacks of the HORRIBLE (horribly frightening, I mean)NIGHTMARE? I hope not! I don't wanna think he won't be able to handle loving Sasuke because of some bad dream! ^^lol (yes, that is my motive for him not having a flashback, him and Sasuke getting together and doing the deed... ^^lol *tickles Naruto plushie under the chin* Who's the perverted one, ne? Certainly not Kakashi-sensei... He has Iruka-sensei keeping him (mostly) in line... I can't wait until the next chapter!!!!! The story just keeps getting better and better, each chapter that comes along!*glomps author* >.
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Reviewed By: anaki (nli) On: January 16, 2006 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw, so sad, i love the descriptiveness in the second chap, keep it up, im looking for the next chap, if only there were higher rating's far as im concerned this has an infinite rating!
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Reviewed By: me On: January 15, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You /must/ finish this story! You're a great writer, and I love the story so far. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 21:10 CST
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OMG this is a great story i love it soooooooo much and i cant wait to see what happends next so update it really soon thanks tootles.
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