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| "My Lonely Heart Beats" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: spriggan_d [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good lord! that second chapter blew my mind out of the water! i never expected that. nice job!
| Reviewed By: rens_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. i loved it. you have got to finish it. Naru/Sasu is one of my faves.
| Reviewed By: the REAL glasses freak & bloody_black_valentine ( MM just deleted me tht's all ^^ ) On: February 15, 2006 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! th was so OMG! holy crap u have to write more!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz *gets down on knees & begs* PLZZZZZZZZZ *grabs author's shirt & wile & screa* AHHHH U HAVE 2 WRITE MORE PLZZZZZZZZ lol, ok tht was fun ^^, um, anyway, i disturbing o.O lmao xD & on Valentines Day 2 read this & want u 2 go on lmao xD
| Title: The All-fearing Peppy Mistress! (buwahahaha!)
Reviewed By: Pepp On: January 19, 2006 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was soooooooooo happy to see this story updated! I was do happy, I was jumping around in my seat! ^^ But then... u-u I read it! It was soooooooo sad! As I type this, I'm bawling my eyes out! *cries* What a horrible nightmare! Poor Naru-chan! (inside snicker *cough* uh, back to the crying...) I can't ever imagine all the pain he's going through! You write it so well, its amazing! But sad and cruel for poor Naru-chan too! WAAAA!!!! And what Sasuke did? Well... the dead Sasuke, at least! And the lyrics! Where'd you find them again? They were beautiful! They fit the chapter so well, I think! I was so moved!!!!!!!! I just wanna hold Naru-chan and squuueeezzzeeeeee him and huuuuuuuuuuuuugggggggggg him! The poor thing! And your err... discriptive details about the blood? >.< Ewwww!!!! (shivers) If theres one thing I hate in the world, its bugs and the sight of blood.... *deadbanned* Yes, I realize that I counted wrong... ^^lol But seriously! I loved the chapter! I hope things get better for Naruto soon! *sniffles* If they don't, I don't know what I'd do!!!! *squeezes Naruto plushie tightly* I wonder what Sasuke is going to do in the next chapter? Is Naruto gonna get flashbacks of the HORRIBLE (horribly frightening, I mean)NIGHTMARE? I hope not! I don't wanna think he won't be able to handle loving Sasuke because of some bad dream! ^^lol (yes, that is my motive for him not having a flashback, him and Sasuke getting together and doing the deed... ^^lol *tickles Naruto plushie under the chin* Who's the perverted one, ne? Certainly not Kakashi-sensei... He has Iruka-sensei keeping him (mostly) in line... I can't wait until the next chapter!!!!! The story just keeps getting better and better, each chapter that comes along!*glomps author* >.
| Reviewed By: anaki (nli) On: January 16, 2006 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw, so sad, i love the descriptiveness in the second chap, keep it up, im looking for the next chap, if only there were higher rating's far as im concerned this has an infinite rating!
| Reviewed By: me On: January 15, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You /must/ finish this story! You're a great writer, and I love the story so far. Please continue!
| Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 21:10 CST
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OMG this is a great story i love it soooooooo much and i cant wait to see what happends next so update it really soon thanks tootles.
| Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fanfic. Poor Naruto... its kinda depressing but in a good way. Please keep on updating.
| Title: AWESOMENESS!!
Reviewed By: Angel00987563 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep, after rading this, I hate Sakura even more, ANYWHO! it was awesome, sad, but with Sasuke and Naruto, its still awesome!! ^^ Please continue, and check out my story, I need reviews, all of them are mine... I just typed them all on there...
| Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 19:53 CST
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That was amazing!!! You have to continue this story!! Poor Naruto. Evil little witch Sakura. I'll rip her apart with my bare hands! Naruto is mine!! Well, I will allow Sasuke to borrow him, because they are meant to be. But other than that, he's mine!! A-hem. Anyway, you must continue this, because it is simply amazing!!!
| Title: The All-Fearing Peppy
Reviewed By: Pepp On: January 13, 2006 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh.......... My.......... GOD!........' It was great! I can't believe you haven't put this up anywhere else (as far as I've /seen/, at least)! I loved it! It is so strong emotionally and written just beautifully! I can't believe a fan wrote this! Its so wonderful! I just can't think of any other words to describe it! It is sad, and kinda cute (how Sasuke refers to Naru-chan as /his/ ^^lol)... I like it! I love it! I want some more of it! No doubt in my mind! You can't just leave this alone! I need to no what happens next! I can't WAIT to read what happens next! Where'd you get you idea? And I just loved your descriptions! They were great! You are a one of a kind writer! I have to say! Gods!! *squeals* If 10 wasn't the highest I could rate this, you /know/ it would be getting a much HIGHER rating! And the enjoyment factor? I have to give it infinity! I swear! Ten is like a below zero for how much I enjoyed it! And if I'm lyin', you have permission to shoot me in the foot! ^^lol Please update soon! Or as quickly as possible, at least! I'm not sure I'll be able to wait too long! ANd Crawling from Linkin Park? I was listening to it the whole time I was reading it! Just to get the feeling of the story (which you wouldn't have needed to even /ADD/ when reading the story, the writing just moves you!)
| Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 03:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. It's kinda sad that the stupid demon wouldn't heal him all the way. I mean wouldn't a whole host be better then an inpaired(sp?) host? I like the way the boys think about the same of each other with out knowing. Sakura is a real bitch. Maybe you can kill her off? Or make her under stand that he's still the same. Whats up with Kakashi? Any way love the story. Please update often.
| Reviewed By: glasses freak [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woe, that was very good, you should read my styry, it the same pairing, i only have 2 chpts up, but i have 3 more already done, i just don't put them up b/c if pppl dont reveiw, how the hell will u no if ppl actully like ur story right! xD if i get a reveiw from u i'll put on the next chpt when I c it ^^ NaruxSasu pairing, tht's my fav! ^^
| Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 22:20 CST
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it's such a dep fic, i was crying in the middle when Naruto explained everything, so sad, you can't just leave this as is, write more, i love it!
| Title: WTF?!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 19:49 CST
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Why How dare you copy Linkin Park! You have defiled their sacred and holy name! Now I must gather angry fangirls and destroy you!!! *Evil eyes with flaming fists* LOYAL FANGIRLS ATTACK!!!... Ah, JK, Just Kidding!! I thought is was cool. I like to do that too with songs I like. Please review my ficcies too. Sincerly, vixypixy_no9
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