| "No Mercy" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: drat, not first!!
Reviewed By: KD nsi On: May 03, 2006 20:28 CDT
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But wonderful anyway. The minor adjustments make for major improvements! Lovely cliffhanger. Well done!!! (says the writer. the reader says---ARRRRGGGHHH!!!)
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: May 03, 2006 20:01 CDT
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you are truly cruel to leave us here! hope your move goes well and you get back to writing soon.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: May 03, 2006 17:38 CDT
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Ah, my darling girl, you are SUCH a marvelous writer. I posted something last night so I don't have to do anything more. Heheh.
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Reviewed By: butler, the On: April 09, 2006 10:21 CDT
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hey! good thing i stumbled over this fic (and the earlier one). i hate to think i'd be missing out on all the wonderful and well-written chapters you are capable of writing. excellent use of twists, though some in the previous fic were slightly easy to tell... but it didn't really hamper the story-tellings' brilliance, so it's all good. the whole "hiding in plain sight" idea is note-worthy, i dunno, i just find it brilliant. although i think the keiji character would be quite tricky to handle, but i guess we'll just have to wait and see, now won't we? (something's wrong, i already logged in and still this site says i haven't... hence the weird nickname entry...)
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 19:38 CDT
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aagh! how many near misses are yohji and aya gonna have? poor aya...the one time he doesn't look is the time yohji's actually there, of course. man's heading for a meltdown. and how sweet is that, yohji still taking care of his team? awww...more, please! you know, RL permitting and all.
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Reviewed By: Heta Noitio [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:48 CDT
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Woo! The scene where Yoji intervened with his wire was pretty dramatic, but that's why I liked it. :) And for once (since in movies it doesn't seem to happen), heroes bleed, too. And I agree with that that Ken would think Aya had lost it. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 21:20 CDT
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well it was good to know that aya wasn't goin mad...but waaaaayyy too short...hmmm *hug* anyway...now update soon
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Title: doodoodoodoo
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 20:09 CDT
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*burst into tears* you wouldn't share with us?! Hmmm please don't delay too long for the next chapter!I want more! Awww Yohji protecting Aya from the shadows! Kawaiiiii!
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Reviewed By: KD nsi On: April 03, 2006 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My dear, if I'd stumbled upon your writing in a book store, I'd be up all night reading that first book--and back at the store when it opened in the morning. In the intervening hours I would be clearing a shelf for your books. Wonderful as always. I do especially love the respect you have for both Aya and Yohji.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: April 03, 2006 18:38 CDT
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Ah, Bly-girl, have I mentioned how much I enjoy your work. Gorgeous as always. Well thought out and orchestrated to perfection. Hehehe. Spam code is IHEX. They know me so well here.
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Reviewed By: RQ On: February 23, 2006 02:20 CST
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aaaarrrgghhh!!! near-misses! hey, I'D have that reaction if i saw aya jogging up my street. besides thinking i'd finally finished the trip to insanity, seeing animated people. of course i wouldn't let him go back the way he came -- what fangirl would? crap, i hope yohji's not going to move now. argh! frustrating chapter, which of course means it was very good. i will positively squee in my pants when there's finally a reunion. even if the first thing that happens is yohji belting aya in the mouth for 'pity-fucking' him...
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Title: new chappie
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sorry I didn't get a chance to review this yesterday, but I'm doing it now! Oooh me likey this chapter - so close!!! So Aya is figuring out his mistakes and Yohji is still hididng. Well he knows Aya is closer now. Much closer. I like it alot! : )
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Reviewed By: glynwulf On: February 22, 2006 13:20 CST
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This is excellent, both exciting and full of suspense. Looking forward to next chapter, and hoping for more clarification on the timeline (Yohji's time with the rich jerk).
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: February 22, 2006 00:00 CST
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Excellent, darling. As always. Love it.
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 23:05 CST
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It might have been a shorter chapter, but it was full of motivational information. I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading more when you get back.
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