| "No Mercy" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: KD nsi On: February 21, 2006 22:02 CST
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ohhh...can I leave a trail of bread crumbs? Or books, or something that Aya can follow? Please? God, you're amazing.
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Title: and second!
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 21:56 CST
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oops forgot to mention that i love! (even though you are torturing my boyos) *hug*
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Title: first!
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 21:54 CST
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ugh aya you idiot! right there in front of your eyes
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 21:35 CST
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ok bly-girl: yohji was owned! (and not by Aya!) you are so goin to have to clear up how this nutjob thought one night = mine forever, and why he thought yohji had no one to go back to (yes horrible sentence there i know)
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Reviewed By: red-queen On: February 03, 2006 04:38 CST
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i read some of your reviews and decided i hadn't expressed myself well enough. this was really a terrific chapter. very psychologically intriguing as well. yohji's got quite the maelstrom roaring in his brain. and of course, even if the story remains painful, i'm still looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Red Queen On: February 03, 2006 04:29 CST
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this was painful to read. and by that i don't mean it was bad -- it was very good, and written well -- but it hurt my chest to read it. i hope there is a light at the end of the tunnel for yohji; i know you're not big on happy endings...
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 21:20 CST
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Exquisite as always, darling.
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 00:31 CST
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aww. why does he do this? i'm so sad now. very good chapter, i'm glad the muse finally decided to cooperate a bit. now flog s/he some more so that you can get another chapter out soon. =^^=
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Title: oh wow
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 20:10 CST
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It is...more than the sum of its parts, Bly-Bly. This is intense, entrancing, it sucks you in and won't let go. I don't care how obnoxious she is, I'm never calling your muse names again! And if that damned writer's block comes back, I'll get Schu to get me some C-4. "or were they violet?" *shiver*
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yay you updated! awww poor aya. not very nice to him. i'm glad you added a sequel, it made me sad how you ended nnne. i can't wait to see how it progresses. so update frequently. make us happy!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 14:30 CST
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haha KD wasn't your first, good job dv. Yay Bly for not leaving me hanging and giving me a sequel! "On missions, he still feels him at his back, dogging his footsteps" I love this line...it goes well with the title ghost, never sure if Yohji really is there backing his love up. Sigh Hurry and update
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Reviewed By: red queen On: January 13, 2006 09:42 CST
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ahhh, i love that song. i always find songfics where the lyrics are mixed in with the prose very distracting, but that's just a personal preference -- the song went so well with this chapter. it was beautifully done, the journey through aya's frustration and his search. now i've got that song stuck in my head; you're lucky it's a good song. :) i'm a bit sleepy at the moment so i guess i can't give a very good review...i enjoyed this very much, and i hope you'll be able to update soon.
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Reviewed By: bewsbud/hersnow On: January 13, 2006 01:47 CST
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Very touching. So happy to see the start of a sequel to NNNE. Looking forward to reading more!
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Title: I'm Your First!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 23:13 CST
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Fortunately this is so wonderful I don't mind saying so several times. *is proud to know you* (first if it ever goes, attempt #3, grr...)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 23:13 CST
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Ah, lovely darling. Poignant and sad and just gorgeous.
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