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| "Beneath the Mask" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 20:29 CDT
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This is so good. And sad! I felt like crying. Poor Hakkai. He's my favourite, I love him! Keep writing, I want to read more. (And it doesnt matter whether Hakkai held her body or not! This is a fan fic, changing is what its meant for!) This is great! Keep going!
| Reviewed By: yukitok On: June 19, 2006 11:32 CDT
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No offence, but Hakkai never got to hold Kannan's body. He was attacked by Chin Yisou after she cut herself in a locked prision cell, then when he tried to get back to Yakugenmao's castle he and the rest of the party found it had been burned to the ground...along with all the dead. Hakkai had hoped to hold her and bury her, but some one burned the castle down. Just clarifying.
| Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 12:09 CST
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This was a very interesting beginning. I hope you continue with it soon.
| Reviewed By: Clover-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 11:47 CST
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Hey, that was pretty quick! I just saw the outline to this, this morning and here it is. That was crazy fast. I like where this story is going, and we haven't really talked about writing a Sayuki fic yet so let's definatly keep it going. X) Loves ya, Clover-chan
| Reviewed By: Caitlin On: January 13, 2006 10:32 CST
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Okay, so you told me that you weren't going to write this yet. sooo. yeah, I need to borrow your Saiyuki mangas. but it sounds interesting. oh, and when you write the little (1)'s, remember to note what they are at the end. or y;know, write them when you first write the number, but just at the end. If that makes sense. That way, we know what the heck you're talking about. Anywayz, I likes it. I just don't GET it. ~Caitlin
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