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| "A Little Night Magic" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: SUGOI!
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd HAVE to give you all tens in this! I mean, it's a completly new idea and I didn't catch anything spelled wrong, not to mention a unicorn turned human? TOTALLY new! Here's looking foreward to an update!
| Title: I think this is a fanTABulous idea
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 14:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I really can't wait to see the rest, but seriously, fix the prologue. Look at it and you'll see what I mean. There's like, twenty pages of the second chapter in varying degrees of completion. It ruins the mood of your other-wise kick ass story.
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