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| "Developing Bonds" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Nicely done!
Reviewed By: denisud On: July 16, 2006 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this one and it leaves enough to know Claus and Lavie will be happy, and IMHo so will Tatiana and Alister. Nicely done and very enjoyable. Again using just enough hentai to give the story a kick worth reading! dennisud
| Title: Chapter 1 great, to be expected...
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your attention to detail is as usual, astounding. Tatiana led such an orderly, structured life before the crash, and you describe her transformation after quite well. She is a lot like Meia in VanDread, a cool, detached, enigmatic personality who is somewhat of a victim of her past. I have a LE fic on ffn in which Claus chooses only one, but of course you are the hentai harem master, so I wait patiently for Alister (Alistia) to get her turn with Claus (and if girl/girl happens with Tatiana, I won't hold it against you), which I assume is coming in spite of her presumed sexual orientation in the story, as she is my favorite character in the series. And I'll eventually get to "Home". Ja ne. W.
| Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 07:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent story as always good sir. You bring lemony goodness to series that are lacking in its glory. I always thought Sophia needed some penis and that Claus was just the man to give it to her. It's good to see this dream realised so well :P
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Reviewed By: Animegirlkdw On: January 15, 2006 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool, but way to long for one chapter, this whole chapter could have been the whole seris, I found some mispellings, but overall you a fabulous writer
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