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Reviewed By: Lillie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 10:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I didn't rate this story because I didn't read it. The reason I didn't read it is simple; when I find at least four mistakes in the summary alone, it doesn't inspire me to read the fic. If you're serious about writing, you really do need a good beta.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I take it this is your first fic. Just to warn you, I didn't rate you on creativity becuase I have no idea where this story is going. The chapter is a little to short for me to tell. The intro sence was well thought though. It would also help readers if you divided you text abit more for reading ease. Keep writing, you'll get there.
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