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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: April 04, 2006 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good. Hope you update again, soon.
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: April 03, 2006 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say this chapter was really good, got me thinking about what things look like and what they really are, like the old saying "Don't judge a book by it's cover." It's like Kira didn't want to know that Hiei was a demon so she didn't "see" him as one. Oh the look on everyones faces when they find out that the Hiei that has been staying with them is there little Hiei just all grown up. Oh and when the SDs find out that Hiei not only knows Kagome and Robin but thinks of them as his moms, they'ed freak don't you think? Hey I really am glad that you're better, it's no fun being sick, and that sick is really not good. When the Shard Hunters coem through the well what will they do and where will they live? At the Shrin or will they back a forth like Kagome does? Would they go to school, and what would they do with Shippo the hyper Kit? Would they put him in school too? Now that would be funny to see. Well untill next time, keep up the good work. SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: March 25, 2006 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to hand it to ya' but this Kira girl sounds like a real bitch. I don't think I'm going to like her much in this story. Hopefully someone, namely Kagome, will slap her and put her in her place. Hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: March 24, 2006 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I can wait, and this chapter was really good, it was worth the wait. I feel sorry for Serena that she had to run and leave her family. I wonder what Kagome is going to do to Kira when she see's what Kira does when around Inu Yasha, the other shard hunters, and Hiei? I bet that when Kagome and Robin find out that the Hiei that's with them now is their little boy they would freak out, well I would anyways. I'm sorry to hear that you got that sick, I'm glad that you're better now. I wonder what's up with the STN-J's boss guy, what is he gone mental? I think he's a demon in disgise, like Naraku or something...I could be totaly wrong and I wouldn't care. Love your work and can't wait to read more. SMILES ^_~
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: March 24, 2006 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I just got done reading the story before this one and loved it and now I love this one too. It's so funny at part that I fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard, and other are so sad that I was crying. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Please get the next chapter out soon, I want to see how everyone takes Hiei helping out Iun Yasha on the home that they're building and what Kagome is going to say? When they get back to Kagome's time will the STN-J be there and still looking for them? Will Kagome ever take the 2 boys with her and Robin down the well? Sorry had to ask, but now I really can't wait for it to come out. SMILES ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: March 16, 2006 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry that I didn't review the last update. I was so busy in catching up on school work and chores, getting read for spring break and all. Hope you update soon...
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: March 06, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That made me cry! But it was still good. hope you update again.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: February 27, 2006 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Gods!!!! LOL!!!!! Hiei got scared by a cat!? That was Hilarious! Keep it up! Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: February 25, 2006 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Both new chapters were great!! I loved them so much. Hope you update again soon. But take you time as well.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: February 19, 2006 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
?????????? You added Sailor Moon? That's a twist. Hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: lovely liz On: February 19, 2006 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story is great it have all my fav. chareters i hope u keep the good work up and i cant wait intell the next chapter hope u up date soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: February 05, 2006 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BACK FROM MY MOTHERS!!!! And I loved this chapter. Hope you update again soon. Will Hiei meet up With Robin and Kagome personally or no? Or Souta maybe? Hiei thinking Souta is Kagome's descendant? Keep up the goo work.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: January 27, 2006 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. Good. This is getting really good so far. Hopefully they meet up with Hiei soon. Update when you have the chance.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: January 21, 2006 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read when Kagome finally sees the YuYu Hakusho gang. Hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: January 15, 2006 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I loved It!!!! I'll bet anything that Zaizen is a demon... somehow. The heads of STN are a bunch of power-hungry bastards. But as they say, "People fear what they don't understand" Hope you update soon and Hope Kagome makes it back to Japan safely...
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