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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: May 10, 2006 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the last 2 chapters. sorry I didn't review the last chapter, my computer died and so I'm using someone elses. I hope that you keep going with the story. I can't wait to see what you come up with next and what new twist is throne in next. SMILES ^_~
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Title: Cool story!
Reviewed By: Rika Munster On: May 01, 2006 04:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! I hope you do a sequel when it's finished. ^_^ I was wondering about something. Unless I missed something while reading this story, WHY hasn't Kagome and Souta's mom and *shudders* stepdad come looking for them? Or at least TRIED to contact them before now? I'd think that the stepdad would try using his connections with the Witch Hunters to try and get some help in finding his wayward stepkids.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: anaki (nli) On: April 30, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, you cannot possibly stop there! You must continue! I love this fic to death!
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Reviewed By: Serenam SilverMoon On: April 17, 2006 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I loved both chapters. How did Keiko even know about the STN-J? They're like really secreative about everything. Is Hiei being made to go to school my their boss guy (forgot his name ^_^')? Is the SD's going to come around the shrine more? Are Kagome and her group going to tell Serena about where the others come from? And are the 2 groups going to join as friends and fight the new evil if there is one, or just become a big group of friends? I can't wait for the next chapter. This is great SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: April 10, 2006 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, it was great. Ok Kira doesn't need to know where everyone is at any given time. I mean that's not what she's there for. And she was just mad that Hiei was a demon and refused her. I'm glad that Serena made it to Kagome's with not to much trouble, and that Michael helped her out like that. What if Serena still has the crystal doesn't she still have her Sailor Moon powers? I'm shocked that Miroku didn't do what he would normaly do when he saw a girl. That would be so funny to see what Serena would do if or when he did do that. Well I hope that you get the next chapter out soon. I'm looking forword to see what happens next. SMILES ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: April 08, 2006 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's a thumbs up!!!!!!! That was pretty good. Serena finally made it to Kagome's. Who will she be paired up with? And who's going to be putting Kira in her place? Sesshoumaru, maybe? *evil laugh* Can't wait till you update. later
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: April 04, 2006 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good. Hope you update again, soon.
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: April 03, 2006 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say this chapter was really good, got me thinking about what things look like and what they really are, like the old saying "Don't judge a book by it's cover." It's like Kira didn't want to know that Hiei was a demon so she didn't "see" him as one. Oh the look on everyones faces when they find out that the Hiei that has been staying with them is there little Hiei just all grown up. Oh and when the SDs find out that Hiei not only knows Kagome and Robin but thinks of them as his moms, they'ed freak don't you think? Hey I really am glad that you're better, it's no fun being sick, and that sick is really not good. When the Shard Hunters coem through the well what will they do and where will they live? At the Shrin or will they back a forth like Kagome does? Would they go to school, and what would they do with Shippo the hyper Kit? Would they put him in school too? Now that would be funny to see. Well untill next time, keep up the good work. SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: March 25, 2006 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to hand it to ya' but this Kira girl sounds like a real bitch. I don't think I'm going to like her much in this story. Hopefully someone, namely Kagome, will slap her and put her in her place. Hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: March 24, 2006 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I can wait, and this chapter was really good, it was worth the wait. I feel sorry for Serena that she had to run and leave her family. I wonder what Kagome is going to do to Kira when she see's what Kira does when around Inu Yasha, the other shard hunters, and Hiei? I bet that when Kagome and Robin find out that the Hiei that's with them now is their little boy they would freak out, well I would anyways. I'm sorry to hear that you got that sick, I'm glad that you're better now. I wonder what's up with the STN-J's boss guy, what is he gone mental? I think he's a demon in disgise, like Naraku or something...I could be totaly wrong and I wouldn't care. Love your work and can't wait to read more. SMILES ^_~
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: March 24, 2006 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I just got done reading the story before this one and loved it and now I love this one too. It's so funny at part that I fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard, and other are so sad that I was crying. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Please get the next chapter out soon, I want to see how everyone takes Hiei helping out Iun Yasha on the home that they're building and what Kagome is going to say? When they get back to Kagome's time will the STN-J be there and still looking for them? Will Kagome ever take the 2 boys with her and Robin down the well? Sorry had to ask, but now I really can't wait for it to come out. SMILES ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: March 16, 2006 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry that I didn't review the last update. I was so busy in catching up on school work and chores, getting read for spring break and all. Hope you update soon...
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: March 06, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That made me cry! But it was still good. hope you update again.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: February 27, 2006 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Gods!!!! LOL!!!!! Hiei got scared by a cat!? That was Hilarious! Keep it up! Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: February 25, 2006 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Both new chapters were great!! I loved them so much. Hope you update again soon. But take you time as well.
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