Title: EIEIO Reviewed By: PlenopticSodapop On: January 18, 2006 06:36 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I never give tens...because nothing is perfect. I can't say I see where this story is going yet, cept it foreshadows that the (pirates?) are going to find land...perhaps a helpless little village to plunder. Overall, everything's pretty good except the grammar. Egads. Seven for style because the Shakespearean banter combined with InuYasha weirds me out. But what can you do? Nice job. ((thumbs up))
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