| "Much Too Young" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: raven( aka Guardianovthe3rdgate) On: June 18, 2006 14:20 CDT
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Momiji's story was correct it is the ones who suffer the most that cry out the least. But like Kagome sometimes one can't cry out, the fear holding them like a vice grip. It is a hard read and probably harder to write. I understand the pain, and the terror of abuse better then i wish to, please keep up the good word, people need to know that being abused is not their fault nor can they take any blame for it. Update soon and I seriously hope her step fatehr and step brother get a serious dose of their own medicine. ja.
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Reviewed By: little mouse1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 20:06 CDT
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so good . update.best story i heard
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. That's a very depressing story. To tell you the truth, I was going to stop reading it if something good didn't happen in this last chapter... I feel VERY bad for Kagome in this story. VERY bad. And nobody could do anything about it? Couldn't Kagome run away? Or could somebody just kill her stepfather?! ='( Hmmm well I'm glad she gets a little bit of hope at the end there... But I want to know what happens next! Why is Haru not being mentioned more? Not that I don't mind or anything, I just thought it was a Haru/Tohru fanfic... Anyways.. REALLY good fanfic, albeit depressing... There aren't enough Furuba/Inuyasha crossover fanfics... That why it's so nice to read a really good one. =D
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies (not logged in cause I'm in school now) On: April 11, 2006 07:34 CDT
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I love your new chapter. It's awesome. I can't review at home cause my laptop got taken away. GRR! Oh well. Anyway, great chapter. I love Fruits Basket and InuYasha crosovers!!!!! Yaythose kind of crossovers with the really long name. Okay buh-bye.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 10, 2006 17:38 CDT
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By the way isnt Akito a girl??? I know that in the manga Akito was found out that "he" is actually a "she"......oh well!!! ^__^
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 10, 2006 17:34 CDT
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Awsome!! ^__^ that was a great part where Momiji tried to help Kaggie. Write a part where Haru and Kaggie kiss!!! that would be so cute!! teehee *^__^* keep up the good work!!!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 07:58 CDT
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Short but sweet good chapter!^^
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 18:31 CDT
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ooooo I hate Akito more now >.< he should die!! How can he do that to Kagome after all her step-dad did to her!! Grrr....I hope he gets what he diserves! I have half a mind to jump into the computer and take care of him myself!! At least Kags got Haru....update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitten101 On: April 07, 2006 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this stroy furuba and inu is such a great cross over!!! write more dang you or noooo cookie!!!!!!!!!! *takes away the cookies*
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 04, 2006 18:56 CDT
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AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME!!! i feel so sorry for kaggie-chan she deserves more love! *hugs kaggie plushie* and that was so sweet with the haru and kag moment....there so good together. well one more thing UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!! I LUV UR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dadada(to lazy to login) On: April 04, 2006 16:02 CDT
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love the story i would love it if u updated sooner though
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Title: much too young
Reviewed By: puppy-chan2005 On: April 03, 2006 22:58 CDT
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This is a great story. Please update asap.
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Reviewed By: little mouse1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 22:12 CDT
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hope u get better. please update.
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Reviewed By: CHELSEA HAVARD On: April 02, 2006 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dadada(to lazy to login) On: April 01, 2006 16:29 CST
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love the fic please update
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