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Title: BYE!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 09:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um... so that's it? you'll pick this up in another story? please tell me that i have misunderstood you and you are NOT going to stop! i'll have no nails left if you do...
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh, you sneaky little devil you! Holly's really sucking up to them, huh? and i hope Alex really rips Zanatos a new one. is Alcadan (i hope i spelled that right) REALLY dead? you know that magic people who are suppose to be dead tend to pop back up when least expected. how is Alex going to rebuild his army? what other allies does he have? and what about Holly and Rylus? arn't they bad, too? ok. i'm going to read chapter 42 now. i'll post another review after that. maybe my questions will be answered...?
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 19:44 CST
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OH! KILL ZANATOS NOW! he's such a prick! killing innocent children! i'd go amazon on his butt if i were brittney. ok. i'll calm down. oh and about brittney... will she ever tell alex? if she keeps this a secret much longer, it might do her massive harm later! you're not planning to seperate them... are you? *sniff* please don't. but if it is for the greater good of the story, i will understand. anywho, i wish to thank you for being an insperation. i have started posting on this site again. *huggs* thanks and please continue. i'm starting to bite my nails...
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok. first and fore most, this is an interesting turn of events. Alex did say for Brittney not to tell anyone but he talks to Kiba. from what you had said earlier, i feel like i am suppose to trust Kiba. but Holly is another issue. was she the one who lied? is she going to go to the hidden room and get the spell book? who's commanding her to do this in the first place? is shadow bad as well? if not how is he going to feel about Holly's dark side? i hope these are the kind of questions you are looking for at this point and i hope i am understanding where you are going with this. i believe that Alex will understand why Brittney talked to Holly. He should be angry with Holly if she turns out to be a spy and thusly lied to both him and Brittney. oh, and if Kiba is the bad one, then you have a really interesting twist! sorry if this is of no help. please continue. i would like to know if i'm off by a mile or remotely close.
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Title: Dude!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Of course I'm going to continue to read! There's no way I'm stopping. You've got me hooked. I'll wait for the grand reveling as patiently as possable. Congrats on a job well done so far.
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Title: Tell ME!!!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok. you didn't SAY what Alex did or what he put into brittney. so... are you going to explain later or do i have to ask for that chapter? i'd like to know. oh, and it's a pitty Alex is only going to "talk" to the Lord of the North. i'd like to see him take the northern relm as well. one demon lord for two relms? anywho, kudos and please continue! i'm very interested in finding out about the ending!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I finished reading what you have posted and I'm floored! It's a great story. There is a little spelling/grammar issue here and there but other than that, it's just fine. Please continue. I would love to see how Brittney and Alex fair through all this.
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Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP!!!!!! THIS STORY WAS AWSOME!! I Love this story, i can't wait to read more of it. on the overall rating thing i put a 10 but if it could have gone higher i would have put it at 18. this story was just the story i need to read to get my head out of the gutter of all the other same storys. your writing of this story was just as breath taking as the story itself. you write so well that it gave me a new outlook on writing methods. i can't wait to read more. please update this story really soon. Ja Ne =^_^=
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Title: Pause
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok. just wanted to say something about the whole kiba/Yuna/Zanatos thing. it cracks me up! on a whole, i'm enjoying the story very much. i'm only on the 5th chapter... and i see that i have a lot to go. don't worry. i will finish. kudos so far!
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Title: LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love This Story!It Kicks Ass!...*Looks Around*COOL I'M THE FIRST ONE TO REVIEW!LOL PEOPLES HAVE TO READ THIS!
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