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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading thei story and i have to tell you i loved it i can berly wate to start reading the sequel
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 13:21 CDT
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*jumps up and down* YAHOOOOOOOO!
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Title: ;_;
Reviewed By: Little Sis On: March 04, 2006 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That Was Soo Awsome!Sorry I haven't Reviewed In Awhile But Busy Busy.Loved It.Glad Your Writing A Sequel.TTYL!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 11:28 CST
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love the epilog. i knew they couldn't stay away from each other for long. so the next story is all about the kid and if it's zanatos' kid or not. well... that's gonna be tense. either way, i'm sure that alex and brittney will love the kid and show it a better life than zanatos could ever do. but... then the teaser you posted hinted to their deaths. isn't this the same thing that happened to alcadan? did scion live? how did alex even survive their fight? oh, there are so many questions. kudos and, as always, thank you for posting this story. i've enjoyed it tremendously. ^_^
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Title: *waves and blows nose*
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
curse you scion! and you seperated them... FOR A LONG TIME NOW! that's so not air. yes, you have another story to crank out. it can't be left this way. i mean, while i like endings such as these, it would be really sweet if you could continue. granted that school and life must come first. i totally understand there. this was a magnificent story. thank you so much for posting it. kudos! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 10:31 CST
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*sniff* i'm almost afraid to click on the next chapter link... i don't want any of them to die. ok... here goes. *closes eyes and moves mouse*
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Title: he's a WHAT!!!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that was a good plot twist! i always wondered why the same spell that would hurt the wraiths would hurt alex. i always figured it was because of him having a human form or something like that. so... is he the combination of several dark beings or what? guess i'll have to continue to read to find out! ^_~ Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 12:24 CST
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oh and another thing is the girls name that was fiends with Britney, Holly or Aurora? thats ben confusing me soo much cause you kep going back and forth.
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Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there again, i love this story and the ending was soo sad. i want to read the eploge, and a second story for this woul dbe awsome. this story was awsome all the way through. if so i would say this shoud be published into a real book. well, i hope you make he second story. ill be reading all the way through ^_^ well please get back soon. love ya Ja Ne =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Inu-kag15(not signed in) On: February 25, 2006 20:52 CST
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I'm only on chapter 39 but man, it was funny when you made Alex tell Brittany he trusted her with his very heart when just a few minutes ago she had accidently blurted out some of his secret to Holly. Funny, I couldn't help but laugh, even though that is a bit of foreshadowing. I can't wait to catch up with the rest of the chapters, on to chapter 40...finally!
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Title: *slapps forehead*
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
duh! i should have seen it. well... i thought that alex might have been the original lord's son and didn't know it... but to BE the original lord. well that was totally unexpected. i'm really excited about these latest chapters. they were well planned and presented. i love the battle scenes. so descriptive. very nice. and brittney was wonderful. she stood by alex the whole time and supported him. that was a nice touch as well. all in all, it's been a great story so far. i can't wait for the next chapter. Kudos!
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Title: YAHOOO!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright! go alex! get your game on! but... wait... you said not all endings are happy. brittney's gonna die cause she's human and can't take alex's power, huh? did you watch "The House of Flying Daggers" or something? Are all the lovers gonna die and Zanatos wins? that's like totally ... ARG! *takes a deep breath* i'm ok. really... *wipes tear away* don't let my outburst change the ending in any way. it's your story and i'm loveing it not matter what! kudos and a big hug. you've got me at the edge of my set now. ^_^!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
right now it's a toss up on the description thing. i really want to find out what happens really quick but don't want to sacrifice any important details due to my impatient attitude. that's how i feel about it. and alex is HUMAN! oh, i did NOT see that comming. nice twist! GO KICK ASS BRITTNEY!
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Title: he did WHAT!?!
Reviewed By: Me... again ^_^! [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 21:23 CST
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*blinks* um... destruction? if it's alex's power, shouldn't he be able to absorb it or something? or at least bond with brittney to help her control it? either way, zanatos is gonna die and alex and brittney will live... right? and brittney won't get pregnant by zanatos... that would be WAY wrong. please don't tell me you have that in mind. *shudders* massive kudos!
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Reviewed By: me... ^_~ On: February 21, 2006 21:19 CST
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whoa... i thought kiba and the others had fallen off their rockers for a minute there. at least it worked. yeah, he'd better be pissed. and the first one he should kill is that rylus guy. yup. or at least let shadow and aurora finish what they started. *grins wickedly* kudos!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 20:45 CST
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whoa... i thought kiba and the others had fallen off their rockers for a minute there. at least it worked. yeah, he'd better be pissed. and the first one he should kill is that rylus guy. yup. or at least let shadow and aurora finish what they started. *grins wickedly* kudos!
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Title: NNNNNOOOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
darn cliffy beast! darn zanatos! darn m-dude! ARG! i'm too fustraited... "sex slave"... oh, that just burns my bacon! Those other forces gathered outside his castle wall had best storm the place and get them out before zanatos has his way with brittney. oh... is that how you are planing to release alex's full power? he gets sooo pissed at zanatos that he ends up breaking the binding and totally fries zanatos? or is this how the thing inside brittney is to come into play? it's getting good! kudos!
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Title: Gomen ^_^!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry for not reviewing earlier. i've been busy with life... anywho, i love the new chapters! alex's speech really worked! he has every right to be proud. and baou! he's now working for alex. oh... that's fantastic. now, they have a chance of surviving this. i have noticed one thing... your grammer and spelling is a little more off than usual. it's not enough for me to stop reading but i have know for others to do so... just a little heads up. ^_~ Kudos! and now on to the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 21:08 CST
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thank you for not keeping brittney a statue for too long. i though alex was going to loose it and kill magnus. score one for alcadan and that really cool ring. with alcadan on alex's side, this battle should be even. or at least faught as close to fairness as possible. but wouldn't magnus tell zanatos what alex has planed? wouldn't zanatos be able to prepare for alex's attack? alex and brittney are tough. i'm sure they'll weather zanato's attacks just fine. oh, and when is that thing inside brittney gonna come into play? yup, i haven't forgotten about that! kudos!
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Title: adore it!
Reviewed By: destiny dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've probably told you this a million times over the phone, but I'm so proud! I love it so much and I'm glad you like the story I'm sending you. When you get home, call me. I have so many things to talk about.
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Title: and cue alcadan...
Reviewed By: odd... [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he's pulling some mighty looooonnnnngggg strings! powerful strings, too. funny though, they make it to the mages house only to fight mr. m. does alex at least get a chance to munch on something before the battle starts? would be nice... anywho, kudos! i can't wait for mr. m to get knocked on his fat a... butt... ^_~! ~greengal48~
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Title: *wipes away sweat*
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 20:00 CST
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that was tense for a "filler." glad they made it out of there. i keep forgeting about alex's white hair. i don't know why but i've been picturing him with something dark like brown or black. *shrugs* oh, well. white hair is a lot better anyways. now... on to the next chapter!
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Title: Pass the tissue... *sniff*
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so touching! the necklace was beautiful. i guess that would have been concidered the wedding, right? oh, and the ring... what's the other powers? the sheilding from magical and physical harm are normal for a ring but i am very interested in its other abilities. masive kudos! don't worry about the 5 chapters being all you've got right now. just work it all out when you can. i ain't gonna stop reading! ^_^
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Title: Welcome Back!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 10:03 CST
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glad to see your computer is working again. i've got writter's block AGAIN! really, it's fustraiting at times. but... not nearly as much as your teasing! ^_~ i mean, 15 chapters! oh, you know i'll read them all. alcadan had better help them. i have a funny feeling he's going to be a snot about it though. kudos! now i'm off to read the next chapter,
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Title: CONTINUE NOW!
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU BETTER CONTINUE THIS STORY OR I'LL COME TO AL AND KICK YOUR TINY MICROSCOPIC ASS ALEX!SISTERS ORDERS!
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Title: BAD COMPUTER
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 20:01 CST
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what is it with people's computers? yours wasn't the only one that's been having problems... *sighs* no big. update when you have a chance to. whatever you do, just DON'T STOP! *ahem* thank you. ^_^!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... so maybe alex doesn't have a few screws loose. i just hope everything and everyone can be fixed in enough time to go kick those three lords butts! will alex be able to take any more beatings like this? i mean, wouldn't it take a toll on his body? or can brittney completely heal him like nothing happened? oh and forgive me for not seeing it myself but exactly how did the other lords find out about brittney? i know she told holly but who did holly talk to? shadow? aurora? i guess i'll have to go back and check that out. glad to see writter's block hasn't affected you. see ya in the next chapter! ^_^
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Title: Curse you Alcadan!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW could he DO that to alex! i bet he lied... doesn't have the strength to break the seal... yeah right! i mean, he's still alive, right?! but alcadan's right, though. alex DID return to his old self once he was almighty and powerful. and what was with the "I still love you, Brittney." thing at the end? i think alex got a few screws knocked loose. so, who's going to save him now? OH WAIT! you ain't planning to KILL alex? *glares* you had better not! please continue and i don't care when you update. i'm still stuck on my story. *smiles sheepishly* kudos!
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Title: *pouts*
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i see the cliffy beasts have been visiting you as well... *sighs* ok. i'll wait for you to post the next chapter. but i have to say one thing, i totally guest right about alcadan! i knew he wasn't dead. he seemed to blinking powerful. so... what's alcadan actually doing to alex? and really now, how IS alex going to get past the wraiths? i guess i'll have to find out in the next chapter. see ya then!
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Title: WAHAHAHA!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm crying here! this is a sad cliff hanger to end on. i am very glad to see another chapter, though. you had me very worried. so... where do i began? Holly's not BAD! that's good. i was kinda hoping she wouldn't be bad. i am pissed that the other lords felt it necessary to send ALL their troups after brittney. then again, alex is pretty strong. and WRAITHS!?! dude! Zanatos wants a blood bath. first the kids and now this! i'm so gonna dance a jig when he goes down. i feel sorry for holly 'cause she's in deep water with both alex and brittney. but now i'm wanting to know who the hell told! As always, please continue. ^_^!
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